[Report This]Date: June 25 2019 1:39 AM Title: 8
Waited too long to read this. Awesome twist. A great way to make the girls care for his survival too, but not so much as to be unreasonable. Great writing, as always. You characters just make sense.
The only thing I worry about is that greed is going to get into the way of sadism, but then again, there is always going to be Sofia.
10/10
Date: June 21 2019 11:58 PM Title: 8
Damn, if that story about Abi's parents watching and breaking down as their abused and battered son got auctioned off while she looked on is true, and she's still so proud of herself, then jesus christ she's a real monster. Here's hoping if there's a sequel that he can gain Sofia's protection or he's fortunate to be sold off to someone who wants a healthy albiet subservient pet.
P.S. Is that last bit about Abi getting the "bug" from her brother a reference to her enjoyment entrapping and selling the diminished or is Abi herself possibly an afflicted victim running out of time (and desiring to quickly earn that safety net in savings)?
Date: June 21 2019 11:12 AM Title: 8
This was great! What an awesome final twist!
Date: June 21 2019 10:19 AM Title: 8
I want an alternate world where Sofia carries on with her original plan :)
Still, you got everyone here - chapeau.
Date: June 21 2019 7:03 AM Title: 8
Oh! wow, you completed the storie here? S*%$! No, no, no... you can't do that! I will go crazy wondering what the shit happens to him! And, Sofia won't get to finish out her punishment... or whatever she had in mind for the poor man.
Hey - this was freaking amazing... loved every single moment of this amazingly detailed story. I read it all in one frantic sitting! I couldn't stop!
I hope that this is continued, in some form or fashion... great stuff!