Reviewer: teradonk Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22 2019 3:44 PM Title: Too Comfortable

great edits on the first chapter! you really are a good writer, the details are so precise and unusual for gts smut, like the valley of kathy's footprint, jeremy cowering at the base of a shag to protect himself from falling debris, and bug guts where kathy has stepped.

and the 2nd chapter is sexy! love how kathy thinks his size is perfect for their relationship. she's so weird i bet she's into some nasty fetishes. going to the bathroom with tiny jeremy to pee. kathy's big bubble butt has so many farts, i bet she's gotta release something else. and shes so weird and nasty, i bet it makes it makes her horny, especially with tiny jeremy with her when she has to go!

great writing!