[Report This]Date: August 06 2019 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 7
I love Nicole.
Author's Response:
She's doing her job.
[Report This]Date: July 19 2019 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 6
I'd love to hear more about her finding her abilities but this feels more like a Jacksmith sister!
Author's Response:
She definitely has some qualities in common with my non-commission sisters.
Date: July 06 2019 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 5
Here we are once again.
So far this story has been a slowburn, setting up the environment and building up Nicole. It's very enjoyable in that regard. I very much like the care and attention to detail you put into this story. The detail you have in this chapter really brings out the size difference and it's definitely caught my attention. I can't wait to read more from this title.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. A big part of this one is definitely about the sheer awe of their size difference and the power she holds over the model town, though things will get more direct by the end.
Date: July 05 2019 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 5
While I do really enjoy this story, each chapter, while very discriptive, only covers a few minutes of time. I think too few actions or interactions are taking place. Is there a way to lengthen the chapters? Great work, overall!
Author's Response:
I hear you; this story overall is paced slower, more moment-to-moment. I've already divided up the chapters, but I'll post more soon.
[Report This]Date: June 27 2019 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 4
I'm sure Nicole is a fine and just goddess.
Author's Response:
All things considered, she's a nicer goddess than others in a similar scale in other stories.
Date: June 27 2019 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 4
I echo the other commenter. I hope Nicole knows they're shrunk in there and plays a game of hide and seek with them. I really hope she communicates with them and maybe they find a way to communicate with her. I'd love if she knew about her brother's fetish and teases them in a dominating way. Great chapter!
Author's Response:
The giant-tiny interaction in this story is much different than my usuals, but it's not just coincidence that the boys ended up here.
Date: June 27 2019 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! great to see Nicole finally make her appearance. She definitely has complete control over these people. Brandon better fall in line quickly. Will she actially address brandon and jason directly? Also does she know about her brothers giantess fetish
Author's Response:
I guess we'll just have to wait and see...
Date: June 24 2019 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 3
I stand by my original critique. Story would have worked better with a premise for the unaware where boys try to get the sisters attention. I would have thought we'd get some giantess action by chapter 3. I hope the pov shifts between giantess and her sibling. Its to bad its taking so long between chapters and were not getting any action.
Date: June 24 2019 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 3
Love the story, but anxious for Nicole to arrive. I only hope she interacts with the boys and communicates with them. Also hoping for an update soon!
Author's Response: I understand why this opening might seem slow without genre action yet; the goal here was to build up to her appearance by first showing the sheer scope of her control before she’s even physically present. It’ll be paid off in the coming chapters.
Date: June 21 2019 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
Will the sister make her appearance next chapter?
Author's Response:
She will.
Date: June 10 2019 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 2
I really can't wait for the first time they realize where they are and see Nicole...good chapter for building the suspense! I also hope Nicole has Carly's penchant for footplay. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. Nicole's not quite a footplay person, but she does have some fun in mind.
Date: June 09 2019 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love this story, hope you add to it soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks, more will be up soon.
Date: June 03 2019 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
Yeah definitely does sound like what a giant Carly would name herself but Brandon is about to have to feed his giant sisters ego when shes the size of a mountain to him.
Author's Response:
This girl's desires definitely align with some of Carly's. Thanks for reviewing
Date: June 03 2019 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really hope his sister is aware that her brother and his friend are going to be shrink in the micro city as I want her to taunt them and let the sibling rivalry play out...
Author's Response:
We'll see whether she does soon enough.
[Report This]Date: June 03 2019 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
I saw the title and even the description and hoped for Carly finally getting her property back.
Though even with all the giant women and things you write about, the one thing I can't buy into is anything on ESPN being interesting in the first place.
Author's Response:
Ah, sorry to mislead. Carly's return would definitely have Blackmail in the title, though.
Date: June 02 2019 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start to this story sir. Im looking forward to it like always. Im sure that sibling rivalry is going to come back to bite Brandon in the ass. Will the story involve any incest at all?
Author's Response:
It will somewhat involve incest, but much differently than usual.