[Report This]Date: September 19 2019 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 5
What a goddess! O_O
Date: July 06 2019 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 5
Here we are once again.
So far this story has been a slowburn, setting up the environment and building up Nicole. It's very enjoyable in that regard. I very much like the care and attention to detail you put into this story. The detail you have in this chapter really brings out the size difference and it's definitely caught my attention. I can't wait to read more from this title.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. A big part of this one is definitely about the sheer awe of their size difference and the power she holds over the model town, though things will get more direct by the end.
Date: July 05 2019 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 5
While I do really enjoy this story, each chapter, while very discriptive, only covers a few minutes of time. I think too few actions or interactions are taking place. Is there a way to lengthen the chapters? Great work, overall!
Author's Response:
I hear you; this story overall is paced slower, more moment-to-moment. I've already divided up the chapters, but I'll post more soon.