Giantess World
Reviews For My Sister, Destroyer of Worlds
Reviewer: MacroGod Signed 
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Date: September 18 2019 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 3
[Report This]Date: September 18 2019 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 3
This just keeps getting more and more interesting 👀
Reviewer: LilVagrant Signed [Report This]
Date: June 24 2019 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 3
Date: June 24 2019 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 3
I stand by my original critique. Story would have worked better with a premise for the unaware where boys try to get the sisters attention. I would have thought we'd get some giantess action by chapter 3. I hope the pov shifts between giantess and her sibling. Its to bad its taking so long between chapters and were not getting any action.
Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 24 2019 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 3
Author's Response: I understand why this opening might seem slow without genre action yet; the goal here was to build up to her appearance by first showing the sheer scope of her control before she’s even physically present. It’ll be paid off in the coming chapters.
Date: June 24 2019 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 3
Love the story, but anxious for Nicole to arrive. I only hope she interacts with the boys and communicates with them. Also hoping for an update soon!
Author's Response: I understand why this opening might seem slow without genre action yet; the goal here was to build up to her appearance by first showing the sheer scope of her control before she’s even physically present. It’ll be paid off in the coming chapters.