[Report This]Date: June 09 2019 1:20 PM Title: ACT I: Emissaire de loin
Wow, this story is incredible. The detail in the writing and the emotion this evokes. I’m so excited for the next two chapters. Merophenee is such an interesting goddess. Why did she come back to the place where Summerlyn is? Does she want to rekindle or break her? It will be interesting to see if real change is on the horizon.
Author's Response: Thank you for the response! I hope chapter eight answers all the questions left by chapter seven.
[Report This]Date: May 05 2019 12:48 PM Title: ACT I: Emissaire de loin
Wow, I love the writing style and you are a great author.
The character names I am finding hard to remember although I do love the language being used. Reading your work makes me feel stupid, It's not a bad thing.
Keep it up, I look forward to your next addition!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! Maybe I should have included one of those fiction novel character glossaries, but then that would give away the fun! ^.^
Date: May 04 2019 9:08 AM Title: ACT I: Emissaire de loin
Interesting setting with its French influence. While courtly ettiquette and rituals are not particularly my thing, you are an excellent writer.
I love the idea of her keeping a miniature elephant in her bosom. I'm intrigued to see where this goes and what the goddess is really like.
Author's Response: Heeeeey, it's Pixis!! Thank you very much for the review and response! The story does start off a little slowly since I want to flesh out the setting, but I promise it's worth the time!