Date: April 24 2019 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 1: A Test Of Power
I really love the story so far and you have to keep going. I have some interesting ideas, you could do transformation into her socks or underwear, you could have him doll sized and have him subsist on her sweat and spit to drink, pre chewed food, and food that she soaked in her sweat. Everything he could eat or drink has to come from her and she could keep him in a cage as a per whole doikg it
Date: April 23 2019 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Test Of Power
I hope she slowly shows him how hopeless he is. Maybe he wakes up and runs to mom begging for help, who doesn’t believe him obviously. Than she has mommy walk all over him unawarely all day as her insoles. And makes moms feet sweat way more than normal!
Date: April 23 2019 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 1: A Test Of Power
Amazing start, such a great challenge with a lot of potential and I struggle to think of a better suited author.
Very excited to see where you take this next. You know I'm already a fan of your stories over on DA so this might a little biased haha, but after that first chapter I'm hooked!