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Reviewer: b123 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2019 6:03 PM Title: Family Bonds

Just came across this story and it absolutely fantastic! Love the interactions with the mother and sister and how they are unaware of the changes. Hopefully there will be more with them and more of this story. Keep up the great work!!

Reviewer: eve Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2019 4:20 AM Title: Family Bonds

Excellent!
The Mother is amazing,  I wish we could have more of her and more of the story ;)

Reviewer: eve Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2019 1:34 AM Title: Family Bonds

Really nice, mini giantess Moms make perfect stories, do more please.

Reviewer: Ombligo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2019 2:41 PM Title: The only constant is change

This really has a confluence of what (to me, at least) are some of the best and I think under-represented scenarios in the genre.

The 'vulnerable giantess' is one of my absolute favourites, and it's done fantastically in chapter 2, rising at a moment of desperate sexual abandon. The power dynamic is obvious - the protagonist is forced to rely on these women for everything - but remains implied. They don't have to seek dominance, or humiliation, or even patronization with Tim. Instead they're looking for love, acceptance, and they fear being seen as a monster. There's a real appeal in someone so apparently powerless being handed this trust and emotional weight - especially with such a sexy scenario!

Aside from that, the descriptions of their curves are excellent, the lactation angle, and the whole unaware reality shift. Too many stories are 100% focused on growth or shrinking - slipping into an alternate universe is an underused trope! 

Really looking forward to seeing what someone "big enough to take care of him right" looks like!

Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 19 2019 3:14 PM Title: Family Bonds

I really enjoyed those first two chapters. Very much looking forward to seeing more from you.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 17 2019 1:05 PM Title: The only constant is change

This sounds really interesting. I enjoy reading stories that have differing heights between the giants like there are different classes of them. Can't wait for jenny to interact with Tim's family or possibly her own.
I'm really looking forward to what you have planned next.

aaron
PS I was I bit confused as to how his bedding area was set up or as to why it fell off the dresser. Maybe I miss read but what I'm saying is I'd just like to see a bit more detail. Anyways, great story and I hope to see more about these characters.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback, aaron! I'm definitely setting up for a bit of hierarchical societal structure to come! There's also going to be a lot going on with all our characters as the story evolves!

 

Regarding your question about Tim's bed. In this reality it's been replaced recently, and his sister hasn't managed to secure it properly yet. He basically woke up with it kinda half-off of the edge of Cassidy's dresser. Let's just say she was in a rush that morning and likely closed her drawer a bit roughly, or carelessly bumped into it while getting ready. This set Tim up for what could have been a pretty precarious position if he hadn't woken up when he did. Not only that, but his 'bedsheets' were already dangling a bit loosely off the edge. With all the tremors that were occurring as everyone got home, plus the heavy mass of fabric working hard to upset it's fragile balance, that was just enough to tip the scales and send things flying.

 

Anyhow, I really enjoy some of the ideas I'm tinkering with. So, I'll be trying to write and update often as there's lots more to come!

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