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Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 07 2019 1:02 AM Title: Nick VS High School

It is an interesting story, and I get that your first language is not English. One thing that really breaks the story is that you repeatedly get “his” “her” and “he” “she” wrong, making it sound like every character in the story is male! If you can fix that it will make it a lot better.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. I'm very happy that you find my story interesting. I'm gonna try to fix the problem to improve the story. Have a good day !

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