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Reviewer: supernatural Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 26 2019 9:05 AM Title: Act 2: Quality Time...?

Its ok so far, i would definitely be careful with how the dialogue is set up, because i have seen people do this before and their story reads like a bad middle school play, but it seems to be ok so far. 



Author's Response:

Hmm....I'll be sure to keep that in mind with my stories in the future. Also it's kinda strange that you rated this Act even lower than the first one....

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