Reviewer: teamvagisil Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15 2019 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 3

Really hoping to see the continuation of this one and some of your other stories. The new one is amazing as well.

Author's Response: Hey thx! Nice to hear you like my stories! This one is definitely getting a another chapter or two :) Cant say when though.

Reviewer: Kamaeli Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04 2019 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 3

There it is!

Good chapter. I got a little confused about which parts were flashbacks to when the city was shrunk, and which parts were in the present, but I enjoyed reading it. I like Lindsy. Also, I got to wondering, is Holli going to be a main character or was she just there to set up the story? (Not that it matters, I was just curious. But maybe I should just shut up and read on.. haha)

I like this and am eager to read more 🙂

Author's Response: Hey many thx for the review! And yes your right, that part was a bit confusing now that Im reading it again. I was a bit tired from work while editing, so I got a bit sloppy. Sorry about that. But please, don’t see yourself as a whiner. I can learn from these things. About your question, this story aint got no sprung out main character. Its not meant to have a heavy narrative or something. Just fun to write about anything that pops up. So if you have suggestions let me know. And yes, Holli will return. Thanks again for your thoughts.