[Report This]Date: December 12 2019 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 8: Feelings Emerged
Really loving the development of their relationship, but I think it would be cool if Andrew managed to get past his mental hangups with magic and learned a telekinesis spell or something, just so he could help Vanessa around their home even if he's tiny. I also think it might be a sweet gesture from him, showing that he's willing to change that much just for her sake.
[Report This]Date: September 03 2019 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 8: Feelings Emerged
Great chapter!! Really loving this story. The return trip into Ness's shoe was something I was really looking forward too. I'll admit part of me suspected Nessa was going to prank him by giving him to Britt to wear in her shoe, and he wouldn't find out who's shoe he was in until after. You do an awesome job of expressing all the nervious emotions, how vunrable you can feel trying to tell someone how you feel. It's nice that they got it out into the open. Can't wait for the next chapter as always.