Was so happy to see that you were able to sneak in a bit more foot play in this chapter. The way that you describe Ness's various scents, and how the little guy takes them in is really nice. Though in this case it was the whole act of him fetching her shoes that really kind of stole the show. 

  It's easy to forget in all our fantasizing. Just how overwhelming simple tasks would become at at tiny size. And how much that effort would mean to both parties. I think you did a wonderful job of capturing the emotional side of the act. And their parting for the day. It really warms my heart to see the bits in which Ness muses over how much her lovers dedication means to her. And I think it's safe to say that it's that part of her, which serves to fuel the little guys desire to worship her. This really is like the perfect dynamic. ^.^