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Reviewer: Theodous Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2020 4:00 PM Title: Hungering

Yet another wonderful chapter. I really like the way that you are slowly revealing tidbits of the events that lead to the "Diminishing" And how very much it means to Ness that her lover trusts her so completely. This is the kind of bond that most macrophiles dream of their entire lives. 

Seems that you were already way ahead of my musings from a few chapters back. As this one featured Ness getting her backside worshipped a little. Which was quite a pleasant surprise. Though honestly, everything about their interactions has been pretty wonderful so far. Such a great story! 

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2019 5:58 PM Title: Hungering

  Extremely erotic. You write so detailed and aware of the all the enviroment - so addictive reading this... you place the reader right into the story. I have to agree with Tallie '100 percent', just so incredible!  please, please, Please   Never Stop!  If someone in Hollywood would use this for a script in a Movie it would be so perfect... 

 I especally love the interaction between them when their teasing one another, it feels so right. Makes me wonder if you haven't really experienced this in real life! :)

 I be adding you to my fav's now.

 Amazing stuff!



Author's Response:

I really appreciate your kind words! I plan to keep writing for as long as folks keep enjoying it! Thanks so much for the fave and I hope you continue to enjoy the story! Chapter 5 is well underway.

Reviewer: WTH I Love This Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25 2019 5:48 PM Title: Hungering

This chapter is SO PERFECT! I mean, wow. You captured the essence of the pet/toy-owner relationship perfectly blended with the romantic partner relationship that is still maintained. I would LOVE to see this explored again in another chapter, maybe(just my request!) one that has a scene like both of the ones in “Chapter 7: Rendezvous” of SoleEmbrace’s “Giantess Dating Diary”(especially the one between Eliot and Madison)?

Also, if we could see a flashback chapter of them throughout the early stages of their relationship discussing, deciding, and then actually going through with the Diminshing?

Either way, KEEP IT UP! Your writing is amazing!

Author's Response:

This is so kind of you to say! I'm so happy that you're liking it! We will absolutely see that dynamic explored more in future chapters. I am unfamiliar with that story, but I will check it out tonight! Thanks for the recommendation.

Yes! We will see pre-Diminishing content and the Diminishing itself eventually. Thanks again and I hope that you'll continue to enjoy the story!

Reviewer: 280077s Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25 2019 6:39 AM Title: Hungering

Is the whole "pet" thing a roleplay scenario? Do they still treat each other as equals, or does she reaaly view him as subhuman now?



Author's Response:

Somewhere between a roleplay and a kink. She doesn't consider him subhuman, those affirmations just got her turned on in the moment. Future chapters will continue to explore these two as a loving partnership, but some powerplay comes through during sex.

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