Date: March 05 2019 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
I think your story is well written and I like slice of life stories that look at the emotional affects of size difference or changing. I am also a hopefully F/f lover, especially when it comes to families.
The idea for the doll is interesting; I have seen robots for tinies used before in furry stories (a recent one I have not finished but can say is well written is Hetzer's Integration, though I am not sure how much it comes up), but this one brings interesting possibilities. I was expecting to dislike it due to limiting interaction, but it has some interesting implications.
I was hesitent to review this story because it feels like a certain type of content featuring younger characters is.... heavily ingrained into the story, and that worries me. I thought Eli's channel had issues with that, and this story passes it by a country mile. This will dictate how much I read the story, but if I ignore that I really do love the family interactions and drama and high moments, so I hope you continue the story.
Date: February 15 2019 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
It's neat to see the new world order concept being infused with a twist that makes it actually feel just that, "new." The dynamics you've set up with the bot are very intriguing, bringing up questions of power and control, and that stuff in particular has made this pretty compelling so far. Keep on keeping on.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Jack! Always wanted to give robots and VR a spin. Glad it's enjoyable reading.
Date: February 14 2019 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 4
Nice story but I aint falling for another SpookyTaco bait and switch. Still waiting on Elite Sister! Zero stars!
Author's Response:
Lol, smart man! Very smart indeed. :)
Date: February 14 2019 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter. Erica and Lily trying to keep Remy safe at the cost of her loving them and it shows how much they are hurting. Think they are going at it the wrong way as in keeping Remi like a prisoner. Wondering if Remys nightmare was about Lily ending her missery also if Remy being small is the reason Lily hurts herself by not being able to be there for Remy.
Gotta agree with GulliversToy on the suit idea havent seen something like this in other stories, tinies using robots to interact with the world. Made me think back to the Men In Black Animated Series.
Keep up the great work hoping we see the family bond later down the road.
Author's Response:
Thanks, GB! Yeh, always wanted to do something with VR and the bot seemed like an interesting possibility.
[Report This]Date: February 10 2019 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 2
Love the bot suit idea. Very new and interesting. Also really like that Haley is still gigantic to her. Her playfulness is going to make for some great chapters I'm sure. I enjoyed how excited being even that much bigger was for Remy. Can NOT wait for the next chapters. And the pictures make it even better.
Author's Response:
Thanks again! Commentary like this helps me get motivated to edit/post the next chapter so much appreciated!
[Report This]Date: February 10 2019 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love this story. Love the characters and how they meld with each other. The cute protective little sister, the brooding middle sister, the mom being a mom. Can't wait to see how this keeps going.
Author's Response:
Thanks, GulliversToy! I try to make the personalities realistic and lifelike.
[Report This]Date: February 07 2019 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thanks! New chapter coming up!
Date: February 07 2019 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice to see you writing again. Was a little confused did the portals shrink people when they appeared? Glad to see the family still holds Remy in good regards even though shes tiny and thinking of her well being. Wondering if Lily might have some trouble after that sleeve movement.
Cute picture can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Yes, the portals shrink people. Some get shocked while others remain mysteriously immune.
Thanks for reading and commenting!