Reviews For Tiny Bewitching
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Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2019 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Andrew

I loved this and await the sequel! For suggestions, maybe Vanessa could turn him into his sisters workout socks before she goes to the gym or something but doesn’t tell his sister so she’s unawarely sweating and squishing him for a little while as he’s a sock wrapped around her foot? Basically anything magical and unaware is my suggestions, preferably feet related. Will read whatever you right tho you guys rock!

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I really like that suggestion, we will probably use something similar to it. Thank you so much, we love hearing from everyone!  

--- Gentle Giantess

Reviewer: Slacker28 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2019 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Andrew

Ok, I was not saying thet the characters are bad I was just debating that they might not be as good "morally" as the person they are trying to change.  This is a good story and I hope you keep it up.  As for Andrew not liking magic, I bet he really does not like it now.  The characters are good I was just debating morality.  Keep up the good story telling.

Reviewer: Slacker28 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2019 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Andrew

Maybe, it's just being rude is nowhere near as bad as kidnapping him, dehumanizing him, and then torturing him in my opinion, expecially sense she is torturing him over a misunderstanding.



Author's Response:

He's both rude to most people and is against all magic and people using magic, we purposely were trying to make him an annoying/rude character, but he slowly realizes how bad he is. There are many other stories on this site that dehumanize or torture for no reason, this story is nothing compared to them. Vanessa tortured him over a misunderstanding but that mentally slightly changes over time as you will see. Rose is another personality but many people on this site love those personalities so we try to give a little bit of everything for everyone. 

--- Gentle Giantess and Tiny

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2019 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Andrew

I wonder now what Rose is gonna do when Vanessa bring him there. Rose has all the magic. She could still make Andrew and Vanessa’s life very entertaining using her magic to curse them or create mayhem. Memory play, etc everything all the cards are in roses hands

Reviewer: Slacker28 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02 2019 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Andrew

I feel bad for Andrew, yes he can have an ego and maybe he is a jerk about it sometimes but at least he is not kidnapping women and torturing them or dehumaniziing them untill their personality changes into something he likes.  I hope they realize thay are the real jerks with huge egos.  Love your stories please keep it up.



Author's Response:

Don't feel too bad for him, he's pretty rude and being tiny isn't all that bad especially with Vanessa. Everyone has moments of a big ego when they are large and in change of a tiny person ;)  I'm glad to see you love the story though haha

--- Gentle Giantess

Reviewer: WTH I Love This Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02 2019 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Andrew

Great concept so far guys! Love it!

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2019 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Andrew

Chapter 4 was great. Magic allows so many fun things to happens like the snap stuck to her boob for example. I still hope since Vanessa will be back at some point Rose has fun with Andrew at her expense. Maybe unawarely turning him into Vanessa’s insole, or into her sock so she can “walk all over him” like he does to people. The fact she’s tormenting him unawarely and she’s his friend will make it that more fun :)

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it! Vanessa will return very soon. Rose will help Vanessa in a strange way, not how you are thinking though, but something unaware will occur that is completely between Vanessa and Andrew.

--- Gentle Giantess

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2019 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Andrew

Second chapter was epic! I love how Rose is teasing him, and can’t wait to see some foot humiliation/belittling later in the story. Based on your description I wonder even after he gets back to Vanessa if Rose can use her magic to force her to squish his ego even more against her will, maybe forcing her to keep him underfoot, and she can’t stop herself due to the magic so he gets humiliated under his best friends stinky sweaty dirty feet :)

Author's Response:

Well I will say thats not necessarily the direction we're going in but she definitely will not need Rose's influence to squish his ego haha

----Tiny

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2019 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Andrew

I for one can’t wait to see where this goes!!!

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