Date: August 28 2022 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: Roommates
Did the 2nd portion of tea increase his shrinking cap?
Date: October 20 2021 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: Roommates
Really lovely
[Report This]Date: January 29 2019 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 1: Roommates
Oh those ratings...
Date: January 24 2019 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: Roommates
Great another story about a decent guy who get shrunk, tormented and likely killed, not as though 50% of the stories here are that general genre.
Fine the girl gets a bit power crazy, fine she doesn't completely realize the harm she is doing, fine she enjoys it a bit too much. Could we have a story in which she has a talk, a moment, a realization of oh my god this could of been me, how would I like it? then dails things back, maybe God-Forbid actually work toward curing the guy. Possible have reprocussions for her actions rather then nutornium plot armor miles thick (family members miss their son or brother, after enough time police reports are filed, secert search warrents are issued after suspect cools down, finding the shrunken victim).
The first three chapters are great, but the way it seems to be going is Lauren is going to get away with litterally murder and Chris for being a decent person and friend is going to his butt reamed at best, flushed like a used tampon at worst. If I want that there are hunderds of other stories to read. Up to a point it might make a good story, but the girl meets guy, guy is decent, guy gets shrunk, girl brutilizes guy then kills guy is cliche.
Hoping you surpise me and live up to the Gentle part at least at the end. Thank you.
Author's Response:
There will be no death me and my partner who write these stories are not a fan of death endings we wouldn't add in the gentle part if it werent true. I will say this he does end up her play thing but Chris willingly agrees because of tbe situation he ends up being in. Don't get mad about the story being a certain thing before it is even completed
---Tiny
Date: January 24 2019 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 1: Roommates
This is fantastic. I love the dynamic between them, I'm guessing that it helps that you've got two writers so you can sorta have a back and forth. It's got a good buildup rate, not slow at all but not "yada yada SEXY STUFF" speeding past establishing characters. In particular Lauren is a unique character for a giantess, confident but in a geeky sorta way, there simply aren't enough geeky giantesses, nor enough "starts as friends" G/T dynamics. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Two writers definitely helps move things along. I'm happy you like Lauren, the geeky scientist was my fun additon to the story. Enjoy the new chapters!
---Gentle Giantess
Date: January 23 2019 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 1: Roommates
really hope you can explore more intimate bodily interaction in this story, your last one was an awesome setup
Author's Response:
We are definetly going more intimate with this story and instead of going in a relationship route, we are headed in a plaything/slave route. Hope you enjoy!
Date: January 23 2019 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 1: Roommates
perfect start, i hope to see more of it soon!!!
Author's Response:
There's definitely more on the way
[Report This]Date: January 23 2019 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 1: Roommates
Like it :-), good setup