Reviewer: combine45 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19 2019 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 3: Lions and Mice

Wow you are doing a great job of building tention in this story. We dont know what she means when she asks who he really is. We are witnesing secual tension develop between the two more and more, and theor is an impending climax of them reaching the slave traders. I can't wait to see of she is savage enough to ignore her feelings and sell him or if she will and have regrets. She seems like one of the strongest in the forrest so I wonder why she struggles to get food. I loved the tortured slowly developing relationship in we fall together and I think this one might be even better since she doesn't have anyone to stop her from hurting him this time. Chapter 4 cant come soon enough