Reviewer: lightwing Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15 2019 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 16

First, Juliette going from relatively nice to gleefully destructive was a surprise.  From her thoughts it seems like she used to destroy villages and towns a lot but started to feel guilty for some reason.

It also seems like the elder sisters have some sort of sneaky plan in place that Juliette doesn't know all the details about, just the surface level stuff.  Maybe the giant king being killed was an inside job?  Zahra being killed so sneakily without a fight was a surprise but also pragmatic.  High threat enemy leader is vulnerable so kill them.

And poor Anastasia.  All that training and devotion and she gets killed on her first mission.  Her master will rampage hard at this but it will also mean the destruction of large human settlements.  Small towns and villages on the frontier being destroyed is one thing but if big cities are targeted then the human king will have to respond.  This story is fun, keep it up!