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Reviewer: Nothingness Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2019 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 12

I had a feeling this was Leonara's personality. It was surpisingly chilling how sadistic she appeared and this is coming from a guy who likes sadistic giantess. I felt genuine fear for the slayers when they bumped into her but luckily Ant's quick thinking actually spared most of them a certain death. Now I can't wait to see how Florence is like.

 

Awesome work! I'm really invested in your story and feel giddy seeing an update everytime. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I was trying to write an introduction with some impact for her so it's nice to know I succeeded.  I'm enjoying the process of creating some genuine complexity to these characters, so Leo won't probably be just a killer of slayers if I get her right.  That being said, even I don't know what Florence is like yet.  I usually have scenes figured out in my head that play out like a movie but I have nothing for her yet.  See what comes to me I guess.  As always, thanks for the review. 

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