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Date: January 22 2019 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Schooled
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. The next chapter will explore those minor (in hindsight, but quite painful at the time they occur) misunderstandings of couples at at that awkward stage in relationships where closeness makes sex be on the brink of happening but no one wants to offend the other party, with a little role-reversal dictated by the slightly changed power dynamics here caused by the size difference.
Date: January 22 2019 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Schooled
Awesome update, as always. Give your writing a once over, minor spelling errors or miss placed words. Otherwise, great imagery and story. Interested what the next chapters title is suggesting. I've been hoping that Tloche and Pacho would explore possibilities together eventually. Hope that isn't crushed!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. The next chapter will explore those minor (in hindsight, but quite painful at the time they occur) misunderstandings of couples at at that awkward stage in relationships where closeness makes sex be on the brink of happening but no one wants to offend the other party, with a little role-reversal dictated by the slightly changed power dynamics here caused by the size difference.