Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16 2019 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 8

Dream: useful for foreshadowing the real ending or for adding an alternate ending.

Author's Response:

Always

Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15 2019 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 8

Wait a second, does Paul not actually speak once during this entire story? Seems a bit odd that he never tries to defend himself. I mean, there's not much to defend on the trying on dresses and getting aroused front, but I would be telling the mom that the sisters have literally been creating dust out of thin air.

Otherwise, I really like the story. The descriptions are all really good. I'm really able to picture every scene perfectly. I presume Paul will be condemned to be this size forever. I wonder if when Zoe gets a bit older and loses her childlike niavete whether she'll realize what she's taken part in doing to her brother and taking his humanity away instead of seeing it like a fun game for all invovled like she does now. Or by the time she gains that understanding, will she have gained an equal level of disdain for her brother as Tory has and see him a deserving of his punishment, nothinng more than an insignificant toy?

Man, this kinda story makes me sad. I'm the kinda person that likes being dominated as part of the whole giantess thing, but I'm not a masochist.

Author's Response:

This story definitely falls into the misery-porn category in some ways, with regard to the changing relationships and the logic of Paul not really fighting back, which I realize isn't for everyone. Glad you're liking it all the same.