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Reviewer: CromoAng Signed [Report This]
Date: November 08 2021 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 3

Great story, too bad it ended like this, but it is better that it ends here to what it lasts and has many unnecessary chapters, 10/10 (it is one of the first stories I read)

Reviewer: Vandenpalmetto Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28 2019 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 3

Ok I was completely wrong this was the most disturbing chapter. Being used by your brother, being forced to keep a job that literally destroyed you and then being sent to your family again for worse activates. I wish you'd just sent him somewhere else as a nice change of pace but I guess it's your story

Reviewer: Minimus31 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 15 2019 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 3

Sad to see this is done, was excited to see what more the mom had in store.

Reviewer: pete445 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2019 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 3

really liked this chapter totally to my liking

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2019 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 3

This story wasnt much for me in most parts but this last chapter totally made up for it. Liked it really a lot for most parts!!!

Reviewer: zhangkui Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2019 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 3

excellent

Reviewer: redcars Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2019 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 3

That was something I was hoping for hehe. So glad you finished it with a little brother accidetent. Too bad it is over, I would literally read on and on and on with other chapters like this one. I could see the brother now stealing his moms phone again and trying something out, and he could be like mh could this thing maybe produce two of the same objects, lets find out. And then the concousness of the older brother stays with the object the kid brother keeps, and he puts the fake one back to the moms place. This chapter was HOT.

Reviewer: arselover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2019 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 3

wasnt a fan of chapter 2 but this one... was fantastic!! is this story finished or will there be more? I would love to see the brother use his moms phone again and then something horrible happens, I just loved the ass part a lot in this chapter.

Reviewer: Moony Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 14 2019 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 3

To quote the avengers "We could use a little worse"

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