Date: July 28 2019 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 2
I really feel sorry for Kyle. This is literally one of the worst things that could happen to a person and I'm now kinda afraid to read what you think is worse in the third chapter. Anyways great story and wish me like reading the ending.
Date: April 23 2019 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 2
Rather enjoying this story. Specifically I enjoy how cruel the mother is to what she thinks is a random pervert but is actually her own son. Like, she'd be nice and caring to him and cruel and evil to everyone else and right now she thinks he is someone in the "everyone else" category. I really want to see what will happen after he returns to normal (if he does at all) and how he will react after. If he is disposed of and his mother wonders why her son never came home, she might research into where he went for his job, and learn the horrible truth.
Good work, I home this story continues.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I had 2 ideas of how it should end but commission picked the one he liked (I hope you enjoy it too). I enjoy reading reviews/remarks. I hope you enjoy the next chapter.
Date: April 09 2019 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh man. great chapter! I cant wait to see the fate of Kyle. Will his mother realize who he is? If so, will she send him back to the company so he can be changed back to normal, or will she decide to keep him forever?
[Report This]Date: March 22 2019 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 2
Read both of your last chapters this and the a shitty job over the past hour. You are such a great writer just wow. Plot of this chapter wasnt much for me but maybe with the brother in another chapter somehow. Keep it up. Looking forward for the Ashely story to continue.
[Report This]Date: March 14 2019 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 2
Really good written. I am not a fan of mommy and daddy kinks so that wasnt really a thing for me, but I am glad youre writing again more, missed your stories. I am not much interested in other stories on here youre the reason I come on here on a regular base.