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Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2019 2:44 PM Title: Interlude - An Exchange of Servitude

Fyi the fine guys at giantesscity have a thread about writer's block etc https://giantesscity.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=87&t=90078



Author's Response:

Thanks! Taking a look now.

I think I'm just about over it (fingers crossed) so going to get back to work. It was an interlude that was tripping me up and if it continues to go slow I'll just skip it and continue on with the main story. It'd be a shame leaving character set-ups in there for no reason, but I'd like to finally finish a proper long-form story. Thanks (not only to you, but everyone cheering me on eager for more chapters) for the continued support. :)

Reviewer: Randomer000 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2019 3:47 PM Title: Interlude - An Exchange of Servitude

Hope all’s well and that the story’s still coming on alright, man, even if it’s a little hard to get the words to come out at times!

Don’t feel the need to rush or anything, just take your time until you’re happy with it, and I’m sure I, and most others on this site, can’t wait to see what you come up with next!

Author's Response:

Whilst blocking on this story I haven't been totally inactive haha, written a couple non-gts stories. I have been poking at the document for this one. We'll see if I can't get a few more chapters done in the next couple of months. :)

Reviewer: footboy28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2019 9:05 AM Title: Interlude - An Exchange of Servitude

How’s the new chapter coming along? Dying to see what happens next! Regardless take your time because the quality is really great here!

Author's Response:

Slowly. Sorry, man, but struggling to write at the moment. I promise it'll be out as soon as possible. I have the next steps of the story planned out, the issue is writing those steps haha.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09 2019 5:54 AM Title: Interlude - An Exchange of Servitude

We are all rooting against that obnoxious writer's block (not just in your case :)

 

As I probably told you a gazillion times, Giantess Michelle has been the #1 thing I wanted to see since the very first chapter, so HURRAH!

 

I must admit, I had no idea she would be so well suited to the role, or that she would be tormenting someone other than Tom, that she could combine cruelty and carefulness like I love so much, AND to see all of the above in a chapter I already liked for other reasons (the dream - I love women driving people mad like that).

 

But most importantly, I never ever thought you would find such a peculiar way to celebrate Vore Day! :D



Author's Response:

Good to know that I'm not suffering alone. :)

I did love writing some giantess Michelle. I'll need to find a way to include her in future chapters. She lacks the naturally cruel side that Riley has, but that doesn't mean she can't turn it on when she needs to! I suppose that her time of punishing Tom, inspired by Riley's earlier actions, has changed her somewhat.

I'm trying to do away with awkward scene transitions at the recommendation of an editor friend of mine, hence the *** multiple times. Whilst I didn't want to over use it, I think the chapter is better paced because of it. The dream sequence was something I wanted to write for a while. I love the idea of a girl with braces and this seemed like the perfect opportunity to put them temporarily on Riley hehe. Plus I really wanted to end the chapter with a call back to the dream.

It was vore day? I had no idea but now I'm even more glad that I had Michelle tease Teddy with a threat to eat him hahaha.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2019 6:39 PM Title: Interlude - An Exchange of Servitude

God I love Riley's crew, I can see where Tom gets his worrys from.



Author's Response:

They're so delightfully terrible, aren't they?

Tom definitely has reason to be worried haha. :)

Reviewer: footboy28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2019 5:07 PM Title: Interlude - An Exchange of Servitude

Once again you continue to deliver! Great chapter once again. It was great to see a more playful side of Michelle. I have to ask how tall is Teddy? i think it was mentioned in the earlier chapter but i forgot. But I am definetly looking foward to the next chapter!!!



Author's Response:

Teddy is supposed to be 1 foot tall/12 inches. I admit, I have poor consistency when it comes to visualising that particular size into these positions, so it might not be entirely accurate. I have been wanting to use Michelle more and it was nice to get some action with her!

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