Date: December 19 2018 8:27 AM Title: Show and tell
Not a fan of getting into your family's underwear, so expect me to skip those chapters.
DO WRITE THEM! You would never get anything written if you listened to every "I don't like xyz", not to mention at times it's not binary - I'd rather the giantess not to be a relative and I dislike descriptions of footsweat toejam etc, yet many of my favorite authors involve family scenarios and when it comes to foot-heavy stuff I replace it in my mind with "blah blah blah".
With that out of the way... I love that she basically needs to have others torment him, I guess she will find it a more interesting game as well (unless she's looking to frame him, but where's the fun in that? oh wait...), and also he might become nervous enough to do something seriously stupid and screw himself.
The only criticism so far is that (unless I missed it of course - hey, a chance to reread this!) there's no mention of the socks in his mouth - he complains about dirt&sweat but goes out to eat with his mouth full?
(also, if the socks are still in, Riley understands him perfectly :)
PS
"Don't overestimate them mom" - "underestimate"? otherwise I really don't understand what she means.
PPS
Is there any chance of any shrinking in 2018? If not, np and happy xmas/new year/you name it!
Author's Response:
Hi and thanks for leaving another review!
Firstly, I appreciate the mistakes being pointed out I'm not a great proof-reader haha and tend to miss things, they should be fixed now. Totally slipped my mind to actually show Tom taking the socks out of his mouth.
Understandable about not liking the sound of everything promised, so in that case I think I'l start giving warnings at the beginnings of chapters, hopefully that shall make the story more enjoyable for youself and others who aren't interested in particular themes. In terms of incestuous giantess content theres gonna be a good amount of non relative giantess action in this story, most of the incest stuff will be when Tom inevitably shrinks and in one or two interludes.
There is some actual shrinking in the upcoming chapter when it is finished but it is quite minimal (trying not to rush it although I am fully aware of what site i'm posting on hahaha), but in the planned 4th chapter, the first interlude, you'll see quite a lot of big/little action and the same is true for the chapters after that with a few non-shrinking chapters so that the story isn't always at 100%. It will be a while until Riley finally has the opportunity to shrink her big brother but I aim to make the pay off worth it.