Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2019 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 4

Nice beginning with Eryn. This character I liked when she was adventures and young in the novel "Exile". When she became the Titan ambassador on Earth I really began to dislike her.

You have done Naskia very well. She has that annoying slow Titan attitude, but at least she can understand why Niall can't trust even her with this stuff. That is the interesting question. Would she or other Titan friends have stopped Niall or Darren to create a strong force that is at least capable of defending its planet and systems against Insectoid, Titan and other warp capable species? I have a feeling they would delay that process, but on the other hand do almost nothing to prevent Forna to force 250 million people on Tau Ceti(not even that, because Pryvani had to buy that location), basically putting them in harms way for insectoid attacks and accidents because of the impossible time schedule. And then the Titans have the gall to criticize and act that saved enormous amounts of humans and the Empire, where is their actions could have let the 100 millions of human deaths. Those 40.000 deaths are the result of Titans messing up. Good explanation in detail why Titans are that way.

Nice interesting set up with Victor vs Sorcha vs Kiri. A very interesting good character for the story, but one most reader like to dislike. ;) That are going to become interesting sessions with spoiled Kiri.

Love the info gathering, studies, studies of different scenarios and war strategies in good detail in this story. They can put that Insectoid carrier to good use.

Very good chapter and just very good interesting story overall. Can't wait for the further developments.