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Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: December 23 2018 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 2-Battle's end, War begins

Awaiting Chapter 03 with high anticipation. Please continue this story. I really like to see where this is going. :)

A lot of interesting confrontations will be approaching in this clash of powers.

 



Author's Response:

Barrowwman,

Reviewing Chapter three now, getting some input, may become chapters 3 and 4, or 3, 4 and 5 as it was over 15,000 words.  Glad you are enjoying the story, It should be updated around the 28th of this month.  Thank you!

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Date: December 15 2018 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 2-Battle's end, War begins

Very well written chapter again with attention for many characters and so much details. Love these small details too, like Eryn using her pinky finger to lift Niall's chin. It is the standard arrogance they have and you portrayed Eryn well. Myrell's sentence when she rips out Joseph's Heart.
The way Naskia talks down too Niall. That is done very well too.
Niall is justified not to trust the Titans on that.
The continuation of the slaughter of the insectoids.
Sorcha and Victor seem to make a connection.
Omi's demands and explanation of how her force is much stronger than that of the Titans.
It will be interesting with the different commanders.
It is interesting how this plays out for the many characters as The Titan Empire is stripped of its power. The development towards that will be interesting.

There is so much to enjoy.
Can't wait for the next chapters to see this whole development unfold.

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