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Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2019 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 10

Enjoying the destruction of the last remains of the Insectoid species. The political stuff going on. You can feel the tension in the air with Omi telling about her experiences in a dangerous area for humans. Privany and the gang having an interesting talk with each other and seeing the power Bulldog they become to fear humans. These deep discussions al in some many different areas are very interesting as if I'm reading multiple chapters. :) Very well done, Sechs. This is much more interesting than Rixie's family history story on TTE website.

Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 03 2019 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 8

Interesting what kind of conclusions the Insectoids make of the DNA and how they desperately realize how little there is left of their forces/kind. This was interesting where the destruction of the Insectoids was displayed in enormous detail over several chapters. :) This display of power will surely shock the whole Titan Empire when it comes real to them in a few days or weeks. What a beautiful detailed scene of Naskia and Niall having great sex and the result is interesting. Sorcha will have a brother. Very detailed description of a very passionate moment. Sorcha seems to have deeper feelings for Victor and Naskia is pushing it a little. Will Sorcha and Omi clash or some relationship involving 3 people. ;) Jana and Galen I like too. Nicely done in the background of Sorcha's conversation. I like their spontaneous fun and the fact that it is her first time with a human she views as a miniature Titan, which make the experience even more fun.

Can't wait for the next chapter. Have a feeling that there is a storm coming.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the comments, all I can say is humans and titans have different time scales, and that might lead to things being misunderstood or worse...

Naskia in this story wasn't as 'overwhelmed' by Sorcha as some would have you believe (Niall in a side story telling everyone though he loves his daughter, they should of outlawed hybrids because of her-of course this is hyperbole in jest, but Sorcha is Sorcha...), and having nearly lost her husband wants at least one more child.

Victor is very much a one woman man (New Avalonian Catholic and all), I think both Omi and Sorcha have sufficient respect for the other and honor in themselves not to make it an issue, or not...

Galen will have other opportunities with Jana to look over both her ship and the ship's pilot...

Again thank you for your comments and interest!

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 10 2019 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 7

Hope you got enough inspiration for the next chapters. I love it so far and what it is building up to.

Can't wait for the next chapter. :)

Reviewer: nevermore Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: February 07 2019 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

I got bored, the story was all battle  That was way to long for 7 chapter I guess if I was a pscho and liked killing but I don't. 



Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 05 2019 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 7

Love all the logistics how Sorcha moves from a Titan environment to human-sized space ships with rooms and hall adjusted to Sorcha and Jana. That is very cool to read. Wonder what Niall and Naskia have in mind. The progression of the story and what one can feel is coming and where it will lead to is interesting. Please continue.

PS. Something went wrong with putting your chapter on GTSworld. There are no spaces between paragraphs.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the catch looked properly spaced yester day...  Also thank you for your conintued support!

Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2019 8:52 PM Title: Setting the stage

Great story so far, guess surpises for the insectoids and Titans in how Bulldog fights.

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 28 2019 7:24 PM Title: Setting the stage

Interesting take on things, how does one fight a war on the side of those that oppresse their kin?  Makes WW II poltical alliances seem a bit easy...  Great story!

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 27 2019 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 6 War to the Knife, Knife to the Hilt

I re-read some parts again. Everyone who loves The Titan Universe and read the very exciting Hybrid novel will love this story. This what-if story is a very interesting idea that many Titans would want to read about.

5 out of 5 stars for this incredibly detailed progression from the point where Bulldog made its entrance, changing the power structure in this Titan Universe forever. Also so the subtle changes in history that happened before their arrival are interesting.

I'm curious how they will finish off the last Insectoid world and if they will use their DNA to create their own insect warriors or if some of their technology could be useful.

I hope the readers give more reviews. There is so much effort and thought put into this story. Thanks for sharing this story.

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2019 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 6 War to the Knife, Knife to the Hilt

I love chapter 06. The detailed destruction, the detailed methods, the weapons use, how you describe in detail the complete take over/ destruction of the Insectoids and the Hive planets.
Genocide has never been this enjoyable.
But the most enjoyable thing about it, is how scared the Titans are off this and that this annihilation is a clear message what could be in store for The Titan Empire.

The ending is a little cliffhanger. I wanted to see how they clean up the last part of their forces and officially erasing the Insectoid threat to humanity for good.

Can't wait for the next chapter. Forna or Ridgemont can celebrate their political victories, but what is happening must make them scared out of their pants. I wonder how nervous this makes the Titan politicians and the Titans that are known for extreme wrongdoing to humans.
They were already nervous when they first showed their strength at Tau Ceti.

Their whole way of life is changed for good. Can't wait for the next chapters about all this.

You have written something the writers of the original wouldn't dare doing alas. 

In the original I had hoped that after Hybrid, Humans would take over some Insectoid worlds, expanding their realm into Insectoid space. Building somewhere in secret enormous amounts of Acolytes and other space ships. So when the Titans become fully aware or when they start to care, it is already to late to take over Earth solar system without sustaining enormous losses of Titan lives. Securing a human empire that grows. Incorparating many Hybrids too as soldiers of Earth.

This situation in your story is more interesting because it speeds up the process, humans are instantly in the dominant one and The Titans have to deal very suddenly with this new realility.

The Titans who have treated humans badly have to watch out. The interesting part will be how Naskia, Kiri and Eryn feel about it and will act,

Tigoni is also interesting. I like her more. She hasn't shown condescending behavior towards Ted or most of her human friends.

Could these situation lead to trouble between the former human pets and their Titan friends when some of the human cheer this development on and the Titan friend are affraid of it.

Again, can't wait for the next chapters. :)


Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16 2019 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 5

Awaiting chapter 6 with great anticipation. :)


Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2019 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 5

Interesting with the Titan commander who demands that the pets surrender to The Empire. The situation is already volatile.

Interesting how Victor is telling them the hard truth. The humiliation for the main character Titans is not that the Titans are evil, but how incredibly slow and stupid they are themselves and that they are cowards or just don't see humans as people enough that they would fight for them at a degree they would fight for a Titan friend.
That cuts to the bone.

I truly hope you will Task Force Buldog fill up the whole Titan Empire space with their presence and in fact decide where the Titan ships can move and where not. They have to feel what it means to be occupied and humiliated and get apathy in response if they complain or plead.

I do understand the feeling of superiority that Titans have, but they are too stupid to run an Empire. Without human interference, they would have been destroyed by the Insectoids. Their other enemies at the border would have attacked them too.

One wrong move against Omi....

The jab against Cage, hehe.

Very good story and chapter with an incredible amount of detail on how the war is being waged, the politics and the main characters interacting with the Innersphere characters.

Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 07 2019 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 4

decent backstory and interactions, how much longer to the WAR!


Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 05 2019 5:12 PM Title: Setting the stage

Getting intresting, the personal relationships, seems like one fight is already on, and the next may come shortly.  Keep it up!

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2019 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 4

Nice beginning with Eryn. This character I liked when she was adventures and young in the novel "Exile". When she became the Titan ambassador on Earth I really began to dislike her.

You have done Naskia very well. She has that annoying slow Titan attitude, but at least she can understand why Niall can't trust even her with this stuff. That is the interesting question. Would she or other Titan friends have stopped Niall or Darren to create a strong force that is at least capable of defending its planet and systems against Insectoid, Titan and other warp capable species? I have a feeling they would delay that process, but on the other hand do almost nothing to prevent Forna to force 250 million people on Tau Ceti(not even that, because Pryvani had to buy that location), basically putting them in harms way for insectoid attacks and accidents because of the impossible time schedule. And then the Titans have the gall to criticize and act that saved enormous amounts of humans and the Empire, where is their actions could have let the 100 millions of human deaths. Those 40.000 deaths are the result of Titans messing up. Good explanation in detail why Titans are that way.

Nice interesting set up with Victor vs Sorcha vs Kiri. A very interesting good character for the story, but one most reader like to dislike. ;) That are going to become interesting sessions with spoiled Kiri.

Love the info gathering, studies, studies of different scenarios and war strategies in good detail in this story. They can put that Insectoid carrier to good use.

Very good chapter and just very good interesting story overall. Can't wait for the further developments.

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2018 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 3

I love the detail in strategy and progression how they overtake the Insectoids piece by piece and plan for many steps ahead. These Insectoids must go crazy at how overpowering and efficient their enemy is. This is a clinical cleanup. :)

Please continue.

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: December 23 2018 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 2-Battle's end, War begins

Awaiting Chapter 03 with high anticipation. Please continue this story. I really like to see where this is going. :)

A lot of interesting confrontations will be approaching in this clash of powers.


Author's Response:


Reviewing Chapter three now, getting some input, may become chapters 3 and 4, or 3, 4 and 5 as it was over 15,000 words.  Glad you are enjoying the story, It should be updated around the 28th of this month.  Thank you!

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 15 2018 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 2-Battle's end, War begins

Very well written chapter again with attention for many characters and so much details. Love these small details too, like Eryn using her pinky finger to lift Niall's chin. It is the standard arrogance they have and you portrayed Eryn well. Myrell's sentence when she rips out Joseph's Heart.
The way Naskia talks down too Niall. That is done very well too.
Niall is justified not to trust the Titans on that.
The continuation of the slaughter of the insectoids.
Sorcha and Victor seem to make a connection.
Omi's demands and explanation of how her force is much stronger than that of the Titans.
It will be interesting with the different commanders.
It is interesting how this plays out for the many characters as The Titan Empire is stripped of its power. The development towards that will be interesting.

There is so much to enjoy.
Can't wait for the next chapters to see this whole development unfold.

Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2018 4:01 PM Title: Setting the stage

Mechs against Giant Insects and giants involved!  Let's see what devolps.

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2018 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

The level of detail and stuff that is going on and the pacing is amazing. The fast paced action comes of the writing. So many characters I know and some new ones to me.

Titans, Insectoid, Earth Human, Avalon humans, Ler, Dunnermac, Other Dimension humans from the battletech universe with their massive high tech fleet and mechs.

With in the chaos of the war, you see interesting conversations too. The level of giant human interaction.

This is enjoyable. This seems very bad news for the Insectoids, and maybe for the Titans too in the long run.

How wil their relationship with Earth develop.

Can't wait for chapter 02 to see how this war develops further and how many bugs will be slaughtered. :) Also some possible interesting political developments and relationships.




Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 27 2018 8:08 PM Title: Setting the stage

So far good preping of the ground for your story.  Please keep it up, just avoid any vore...

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