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Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 14 2018 6:36 PM Title: It's Like I'm Really There

Very well written. I really enjoyed reading that. Forgot I was reading a fetish story in fact!

Author's Response:

Much appreciated Gershwin. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story just as much

Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13 2018 10:11 PM Title: It's Like I'm Really There

Nice working Jenny’s powers in with the story Loya was telling. I’m loving their relationship. How she’s already comfortable talking to him with him between her toes shows how quickly they’ll be willing to dive into other fetish elements. Can’t wait for whichever one will be featured next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you kanto. Yeah Jenny's really into exploring her fetish so she has no qualms about diving head first into the sexy stuff right away. I also enjoyed the idea of their storytelling dynamic. I thought the chapter would have been boring with just John telling a story (as was my original plan), so I found a way to get Jenny involved. Glad that you liked it and thank you for commenting

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