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Reviewer: The Micro Giant Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 14 2018 3:34 PM Title: A Tiny Little Tingle

This seems like a fun, hot beginning! I can't wait to see what happens next! My one suggestion would be to slow down and describe things more. At extreme sizes that makes it more tactile for the reader. 



Author's Response: Thanks for the advice! I have tried to implement more detail more into the later chapters, let me know what you think! P.S: is there going to be another chapter of “a friendly wager” out soon? I really like the concept and want to see where the story goes!

Reviewer: Rise8 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14 2018 8:54 AM Title: A Tiny Little Tingle

I’m definitely interested. 1/16 an inch is a very small size that leads to a lot of unaware scenarios. Can’t wait to see where he ends up on her.

Author's Response: Thank you for your interest!

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