Reviewer: Footsteps Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2018 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 1: Setting the Stage

Really enjoying this story, and love that you’re striving to make it seem possible. The little glimpses into other women’s lives is great and I hope to keep seeing that. Im not sure how much time will pass over the course of this story, but I would also love to hear how men might change over the years/decades/centuries. Like perhaps men lose the ability to regulate their body temperature and rely on the warmth from between the ass cheeks of his owner..or “unfiltered” oxygen is too sharp and crisp..resulting in lung irritation. Anyway, love the story and can’t wait to see more.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review and the ideas. I did touch on the body temperature issue in chapter 9 but I didn’t really develop that aspect much as drafted. But I like your idea. Yet another dependency factor and it’s one that might be used in the narrative to compel the little males to remain in their lovers’ panties most of the time. Room temperature would be too chilly! Like it. I may even go back and edit a bit to work that issue in a bit more since I sort of left that hanging.... thanks for reminding me!!!

Reviewer: Frosty1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 25 2018 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 1: Setting the Stage

I also remember the story. Really hope that there will be further chapters soon. 

What I liked besides the shrinking of mankind, was the interracial aspect. Two white boys completely enslaved by an Arab and Indian Godesses. Maybe that part could be more emphasized in future chapters? Also having spin off chapters, which would show how certain parts off the world would change? For example Muslim women being more violent towards men after these changes and having need to import tiny men/slaves.

The Chinese cloning tiny men as supplier to these demands. Maybe Adam could be even used as one of the DNA sources for this? Then have several chapters with different kinds of women around the world who would use Adam as their little sex toy.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and ideas.  I expect to add to the story as I am able to.

Reviewer: ozoris Signed [Report This]
Date: October 20 2018 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 1: Setting the Stage

great story

i want u to make another series of a story like that pls