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Reviewer: Cameron99 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07 2019 1:35 AM Title: First appointment

I respect that you're having a hard time. a lot of us are. But it's a shame to see what was literally my favorite foot story on here removed, and put behind a paywall. If you had opened up a Patreon, and added new stuff to it, and perhaps posted say a first chapter preview on here for it, I'd have totally subscribed to your Patreon. 

But to take away content you had previously put, then to say if you want to re-read it, pay me, just feels wrong. So I do apologize, because I can't in good faith support those kind of tactics. I wish you luck. 



Author's Response:

I am going to post new stuff on Patreon from now on too. I am using what I got (writing and imagination) to try and make a bit for a living in a moment of my life that is hard and I do not see what is different here than any published author trying to survive. I've been giving away my stories freely for years, never recieved a single penny from comissions and I see others do it. I believe that for 5$ a month on Patreon you'll get more than enough of what you and I share as common interests and I invite you to go beyond what you think here is wrong, to come and join me over there for exclusive content and stories.

If you don't want to I appreciate you commenting and telling me nonetheless. I always appreciate when people let me know what they think, good or bad.

Reviewer: Luidgi Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25 2019 5:40 PM Title: First appointment

Come see me on Patreon, I am moving my stories over there.
https://www.patreon.com/user?u=21572194



Author's Response:

https://www.patreon.com/luidgi works too

Reviewer: Footsteps Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31 2019 9:31 PM Title: First appointment

There’s nothing I love more than the passage of time! I’d love to see a future where Kelly graduates and gets a great job all thanks to her free education that she appreciates Ms Allen for but barely even considers it prudent to thank her. Maybe all that time in her shoes with her feet lengthens her life span a believable but interesting amount. Maybe even waaay down the line when Kelly’s children are older, Ms Allen could become a family heirloom passed down to the next foot. Just some fun ideas! I loved this story, and if it ends here that’s fine too.

Reviewer: Yudontknuw Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 09 2019 1:12 PM Title: First appointment

In my opinion if you do part 2 you should focus the family instead of kelly : )

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2018 5:59 PM Title: First appointment

I love how nonchalant her and her mother are about all this, really great stuff.

Reviewer: TheDix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 19 2018 3:16 PM Title: First appointment

Genial no encuentro fallas en lo que escribes y captas al lector.
Siempre me impresionas con cada escritura que haces, tienes una imaginacion y narrativa increibles. se que tu lenguaje es el ingles por favor disculpa el que escriba en españo ojala google traductor pueda servir.
Me gustan tus historias, espero seguir leyendo mas material tuyo, ya sea nuevo, antiguo o continuado 

Reviewer: mrcool Signed [Report This]
Date: December 02 2018 11:00 AM Title: First appointment

Another absolutely briliiant story Luidgi!!!  I always loved your themed F/F stories, to me they tend to just add to the humiliation and are much more rare than F/M.

I love all your stories



Author's Response:

Always a pleasure to know I'm not writing this only for myself, haha! Good to hear from you. There is more coming.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2018 9:34 AM Title: First appointment

@Footsteps you may want to read "Sweat & Tears" by Kyary, it's the closest story I know to what you have in mind (even if it's incomplete) - if you know anything better, do let me know!

Reviewer: Noki_tapis Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 27 2018 3:13 PM Title: First appointment

Je suis impréssionné par ta façon d'écrire en anglais. Tu fait des histoires vraiment bien détaillés en particulier pour la mise en place et le dévelloppements des personnages et de leurs interconnexions.

J'ai hâte de lire n'importe quelle histoire tu écrit. J'ai aussi vu que tu était sur DA. Ce monde est petit ^^

Au plaisir de te relire en tout cas.

A bientôt ! Nico

Reviewer: Footsteps Signed [Report This]
Date: November 26 2018 8:09 PM Title: First appointment

I really think this story has ruined other stories for me. I love the way miss Allen looked at her like she was just some random teen...and then she slowly started to become infatuated. And the struggle she feels! You do a fantastic job of expressing her inner enjoyment and agony.

I also loved the parts when Kelly and Mel were consuming miss Allen with their feet in an absentminded way, like being on their phones or computers working.

I’m a big fan of “scent reprogramming” and I sort of get that hint from this story (although her love for Melanie’s feet kind of stomped that a bit). I would love it if Kelly further punished ms Allen by sneaking her into her Mothers or friend’s mother’s footwear..perhaps to show her how horrible it is to be with someone else’s feet besides hers

Anyway, I’m rambling now. Just had to say how much I’m enjoying it so far. Hope to see more fuzzy socks!

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review, I like your ideas.

Reviewer: Darrennick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 26 2018 5:33 PM Title: First appointment

Nice additions to the story, would there be any foot scenes with people other then Kelly?(like Melany, her Daughter) and I can’t wait for the morning jog chapter.
I also would like to see more humiliation like teasing taunting and bullying etc.
Thanks for the story

Reviewer: celcius Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2018 9:38 AM Title: First appointment

What a great chapter, Kelly used to be gentle wit h her. But now she is slowly unveiling her trueself and the dark side of her is showing to Ms. Allen and she is literally helpless. I love how you develop and describe the character's personality. Keep it up! I love this story!

Reviewer: KindaEmbarassed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 10 2018 12:09 AM Title: First appointment

Don't really understand the issue with saying a shoe belongs to a kid. Sort of weird that people see that as sexualizing children. If you see kids used footwear as sexual that seems like a problem of personal perception. I don't want to get into any more drama tho so I'll stop here. It just sort of miffed me that the author needed to alter his story just because somebody felt bothered by it.

Reviewer: GuessWho Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: October 24 2018 3:45 PM Title: First appointment

No, not enough said. You never warned anyone this story was going to be about 12-year-olds. That's disgusting. Stop sexualizing children.

Author's Response:

First, I am not sexualizing children. This story isn't about sexuality, nor is it about any kind of sexual desire of any kind. Stop seeing sexualization where there is not.
Second, there is no interaction with Melany's daughter, only her shoes, which is an object.
Third, if it makes you happy, I have removed age reference, so you can sleep better tonight. 

Thanks for sharing your opinion.

 

Reviewer: Benja999 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24 2018 9:56 AM Title: First appointment

As always a fantastic story from you!

I really like all of your storys characters are great every time.  The last chapter I enjoyed the mostbso far. The idea with the real smelly shoe of the daughter really hits the spot for me. I also liked thar she got even smaller. Now she's the perfect size. Can't wait for more chapters and I hope kelly will do some real disgusting stuff to her. 

 

I would really like to see some variety. I love the stinky feed and foodwear stuff. But some buttstuff or spit snot woulf be great.

 

Thanks for your great stories. 

Please keep going



Author's Response:

Thank you.
I am not a fan of butts or spit, I usually write about what I like, and I am glad you can enjoy it too.

Reviewer: KindaEmbarassed Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 24 2018 8:29 AM Title: First appointment

Normally not that interested in feet, but this story does them in such a way that it keeps you reading. It has good background and character development, and it doesn't skimp on hot scenes. Last chapter was my favorite so far, looking forward to the rest.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoy it!

Reviewer: Cameron99 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2018 10:05 PM Title: First appointment

Another fun chapter. Enjoyed seeing the new scenario she is in with Kelly .Look forward to another one .

Reviewer: closetslave1 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2018 6:53 PM Title: First appointment

Awesome chapter. I love how you describe things in such a way that you can feel the anticipation in Mrs Allen as she sinks deeper and deeper into her own depravity. She sees Kelly as a Goddess and is perhaps in love with her now. I find myself wondering though, will Kelly change and become more cruel?

Will she come up with some way to keep her little toy for herself? Will Mrs Allen regret her decision to give in to her urges.

I certainly hope so, because then it will get even more exciting...



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. I am happy you enjoy the story so far. We'll see what happens!

Reviewer: UHF Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: October 22 2018 11:02 PM Title: First appointment

The characters in the story just keep getting younger and younger... Most people aren't here for underage stuff. In fact, it's rather creepy.

Author's Response:

You have the right to not read it too.

Reviewer: LittleJ Signed [Report This]
Date: October 17 2018 3:32 PM Title: First appointment

Absolutely love all of your work and this might be my favorite story yet! I keep coming back and checking for more chapters! Thank you for sharing!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! More chapters coming soon, I just need to find time!

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