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Reviewer: Shrunkenman94 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10 2020 8:11 PM Title: Ch 20: Alone Time with Sakura's Toes

Interesting chapter! Love that Sakura is borderline evil in this! Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18 2019 4:13 AM Title: Ch 19: Lunch with the Girls...

Yes! Sakura route beggins kkkkk. I am not so much into vore, but it was a good chapter. I liked it.

Only one question: can we hope for a Taiga route after Sakura?

Thank you and keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

We'll be seeing Sakura for a little bit longer, but I'll probably do a more expanded route for her as a bonus chapter.

As for Taiga, I doubt it. I might do something as another bonus chapter, but those will be way off.

I've got two other fun ideas on characters for Shirou to interact with while shrunken for bonus chapters.

Take care!

Reviewer: amerdism Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12 2019 8:38 PM Title: Ch 18: Taiga & Sakura Arrive...

Nice to see this story being updated again. Was starting to worry it was going to be abandoned. It’d be nice to see more interactions from the other various women in the stay night series. Will you be doing separate stories on Fate Grand Order and Apocrypha? Or even Extra/Extella? Loving the unaware stuff, not something you see slot in fate stories.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

I just had to leave this story on hold while working on other things. And any content about non Fate/Stay Night characters will still happen in this story, but they'll listed as bonus chapters.

I've already got a few ideas. I don't play Grand Order, but I may watch the new anime, so that'll give me ideas for those characters if I do watch it.

Take care!

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 10 2019 8:01 AM Title: Ch 18: Taiga & Sakura Arrive...

Nice. Judging from what you said to my last review. Shirou won't actually get sent into a stomach like I'd like to see, just come close. But at least it is something. Looking forward to the net chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Hope you enjoy what happens during the lunch. It should be fun.

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30 2019 4:10 PM Title: Ch 15: Shopping while within Saber's Bra... (Saber Route)

Nice. I was wondering when this route would be written. Is it bad that with them going to get food that it makes me hope that Saber ends up accidentally/unknowingly swallowing Shirou, and as a servant it does not kill him, with it being possible to live in her stomach for him. Oh well up to you.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

I think that, knowing who Saber is, that isn't a crazy suggestion. While it may not happen the way you exactly hope, you can expect some form of that to show up in the coming chapters. There are a few parts where Saber almost eats Shirou without noticing them.

Check out Chapters 3 and 14 if you want to see some of that.

Take care!

Reviewer: amerdism Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25 2019 2:53 PM Title: Ch 14: Winning the Grail War (Rin Route END)

Hmm, it’ll be a shame when this story ends. Have you thought about continuing with a different fate series?

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! And sorry for not responding sooner.

To answer your question, I do plan on writing some bonus chapters on characters outside of Fate/Stay Night. I'd like to keep those ideas to myself for now, to keep them a surprise. I'll work on them once I finish up Saber's solo route.

Take care!

Reviewer: amerdism Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11 2019 4:57 PM Title: Ch 1: The Beginning...

So is this getting updated again anytime soon?



Author's Response:

It took me a while to get back to you, but I ended up updating the story twice since your review (one of them was today [6/23]). Hopefully you noticed that by now, but if not, I hope you enjoyed the new chapters.

Take care!

Reviewer: daftpunk Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28 2018 11:43 PM Title: Ch 1: The Beginning...

i'm a big fan of your writing! love the way you do unaware scenes. good job!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

I'm glad you like how I do the unaware stuff. There will definitely be more of that in the next chapter (out now) and beyond.

Your story is doing great too, so awesome job with your first story!

Take care.

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28 2018 11:36 PM Title: Ch 10: A Bath with Rin & Saber... (Rin Part 4)

Nice chapter. Hope he ends up following the water into either Saber or Rin's vagina.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

And while things won't be going the way you suggested, there could still be those kinds of interactions whenever either Saber's or Rin's stories get closer to their conclusions.

Take care!

Reviewer: Defiad Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2018 6:04 PM Title: Ch 9: Showering with Rin...? (Rin Part 3)

Oops. I forgot to leave a review for this chapter! I really enjoyed this one, gave me Nesi shower fun time vibes! Except unaware, of course. I love Rin's character, so this was amazing. Especially the bit near the end where Shirou just got to admire Rin's form, being an inadvertent voyeur . I look forward to the bath and the fun times in there.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

I wanted to make the shower interaction unaware, because I realized that Rin wouldn't actively have Shirou join him at this stage. I kind of rushed it with the chapter leading up to it, hence my minor rewrite before I released Chapter 9. Glad you liked the chapter and that it reminded you of the Nesi stuff, which was also pretty fun to write.

I hope you like the next chapter. (which is out by the time of this response)

Reviewer: Defiad Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 14 2018 10:39 PM Title: Ch 8: Exercising with Rin... (Rin Part 2)

Ooooh. Shower time with Rin! Sounds like a very envious position, great chapter as always, I'm not usually a fan of work out stuff, but this was pretty nice! Hope we see some chapters with Rider or Sakura! Given Rider's hatred/insecurity about being so tall, I imagine it'd be cute to see her get flustered by seeing someone she literally towered over.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

I'm glad you liked the chapter.

I made some minor changes to how the next chapter will got (it's out at the posting of this response) but it should be just as fun.

And for other characters, I don't have any current plans to focus on Sakura or Rider at the moment. One of them could show up in a bonus chapter or something, but I'd rather not relegate Sakura to just a bonus chapter, since she is one of the main girls. Rider could be cool for a bonus though.

Reviewer: flashbat78 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11 2018 12:52 AM Title: Ch 7: Entertaining Rin Tohsaka... (Rin Part 1)

will Shirou be with his female teacher unaware and get eattin plus trap in her stomich for a while



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

I haven't thought of including Taiga Fujimura (I think that's who you mean), but it could still happen as a bonus or something. Maybe not exactly what you describe, but something with Taiga in general.

Reviewer: Defiad Signed [Report This]
Date: November 03 2018 1:57 PM Title: Ch 6: Seeking Rin's Aid (Route Split Next)

I'd absolutely love some Rin content first! Her tsundereness could be lots of fun. Some Rin and Saber together could be amazing too



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Writing Rin's route first would definitely be a fun change of pace, and it would be also cool for them doing stuff together.

Take care!

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 28 2018 10:59 PM Title: Ch 5: A Walk in Saber's Boot...

Nice chapter. I was looking forward to this one and your fire emblem story being updated.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Glad you liked the chapter.

This one and my Fire Emblem one are pretty fun for me too. I'm sure I'll get back to Fire Emblem soonish. My Shrunk at College Side Story will probably end in a few chapters though.

Take care!

Reviewer: Defiad Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16 2018 3:11 AM Title: Ch 4: Planning The Next Move...

Still absolutely loving this story!! Saber is fantastic and I hope that somewhere along the story, Saber given her pension for hunger ends up putting Shirou in her mouth an sucking on him at some point only for the dominant effect to wear off and her to be like I AM SO SORRY....and yet he tasted great...so she kinda wants to put him back in.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Glad you're still enjoying the story.

For your suggestion, I can't see that happening exactly how you describe, since Saber wouldn't see the super tiny Shirou as a source of food. BUT I can see something where Saber does that as a form of punishment, during a moment when that dominant side takes effect, before reacting just as you describe when it wears off. It could definitely be fun.

Take care dude!

Reviewer: Sg20855 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2018 11:45 PM Title: Ch 4: Planning The Next Move...

Good chapter, I liked the foot related stuff. Interesting to see Saber being affected somehow to being somewhat more dominant towards Shiro. Eager to see how things will play out with Rin and to see some foot related stuff with her too



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

I wanted to have an excuse to make Saber a bit more dominant, at least for occasional moments. And of course Saber would normally treat a tiny Shirou with the utmost care and affection, so this keeps things interesting.

And once Rin makes her appearance, there will definitely be foot stuff with her. That should be pretty fun to write.

Take care!

Reviewer: Sg20855 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 09 2018 9:42 PM Title: Ch 2: In a Heroic Spirit's Slipper...

Another good chapter, wonder what will happen to Shiro now that he's been discovered by Saber to have shrunk and how this will affect his interactions in the grail war to come. Eager to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thanks for another review!

And I'm sure many of those questions will be answered as things go forward. As a hint, just because Shirou was discovered doesn't mean that unaware interactions are now impossible. Hope you continue to enjoy the story.

Reviewer: Sg20855 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2018 6:08 PM Title: Ch 1: The Beginning...

Great to see some fate related stuff. Hope we can see Rin in the coming chapters and have some feet and stocking related stuff with her.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Rin is pretty awesome too, so you'll definitely see her at some point, probably with those things you listed. It's just a matter of when.

Reviewer: Wot Mk II Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2018 10:32 PM Title: Ch 1: The Beginning...

Yay!!! Baber Giantess!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! And Baeber is pretty awesome.

Reviewer: Defiad Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04 2018 9:38 PM Title: Ch 1: The Beginning...

There is absolutely a lack of Fate size stuff. Fantastic writing as always, I look forward to more updates in the future <3



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it so far. This should be a fun story to write.

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