Giantess World
Reviews For Emily in charge
Reviewer: Thornton Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10 2011 11:52 AM Title: The first day
Date: May 10 2011 11:52 AM Title: The first day
Geez, that was a bit of a harsh review. Good work on the story, I'm into the sadistic edge that you wrote about, the transformation was good, and I liked how you described her ass, it's a weakspot for me.
I hope you kept writing, it has potential.
Thornton.
Reviewer: Stylesrj Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30 2007 6:05 PM Title: The first day
Date: September 30 2007 6:05 PM Title: The first day
A bit too short and not very arousing. You could elaborate on it more, do more object changes, that sort of thing. Don't stop at one idea and just end it like that.
I expected more from it, but you could do a bit of touch up with the spelling errors. Use Microsoft Word or some good word processor to fix it up and then re-submit it with the changes.