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Reviewer: brokenone Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12 2019 3:11 PM Title: Halfling's journey (part 2)

 i like your work. (my english isn t  much good. if is not, and i m not to good to say compliments).

but it feels somenting heavy at some place.

I not sure.

i do really like to see how a god, a king or someone powerfull finish under of feet of someone who is not.

you have a great talent, specialy for short stories.

 

 

 

Reviewer: footboy28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 17 2018 4:31 PM Title: Halfling's journey (part 2)

Great chapter as always!!! Loved the trio of orcs torture.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Sorry I didn't respond to you asking for an update, a response seemed a tad unnecessary since I just uploaded another chapter haha! As always, I am happy to see that you enjoyed it :)

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