[Report This]Date: November 18 2018 11:25 AM Title: The girl who played with fairies
Wow, I don't know how I missed this chapter when it came out. Is great! The idea of being shrinking to a small size to a being already small like a fairy is awesome. I'm especially pleased with this because I like F/f more. And the domination of the fairies through the whole ordeal was very nice, especially like how Juniper placed her feet in front of Abigail's eyes when the potion was thrown in her mouth!
And well, I'm more of a fan of a personal approach rather than group domination but still enjoyed a lot this chapter!
Author's Response:
Honestly that is probably my favourite out of the stories I've written so far, I hope I can write another that comes close to it. I like writing f/f and I intend for some of the future stories in this volume to be f/f as well, just to provide more variety if nothing else. I haven't seen loads of content where the giantess in question is quite small herself, so I thought it would be a good idea to explore and I'm glad it paid off.
Glad you liked it so much!
[Report This]Date: October 16 2018 11:05 PM Title: The girl who played with fairies
Hey there duck12345, thank you for the reply to my review. Yeah, after seeing how much your writing has improved I thought I'd go in depth with my review, and likewise, I know the more specific and in depth the review and feedback, the better it is for the writer.
Regarding the delay and slowing down of updates, that's perfectly fine, so far you've delivered consistent quality, and it's like another reviewer said, it's about quality over quantity.
That tease about an upcoming orc story has me greatly excited, especially the parts with having the tiny have an uncomfortable attraction towards the orcs stinky feet and the possibility of there being sisters of the orc added to the mix as well. It'll be nice to see a tiny actively lust after their giantesses feet again albeit maybe uncomfortably or with some reservations. With the tiny's uncomfortable attraction, that also adds alot of opportunities for the taunting and teasing about how the tiny likes their feet, and sexual humiliation by the orc and possibly her sisters with their feet, absolutely brilliant.
Even though it may be far from now, I look forward to that story, and hope to see lots of orc boot, insole, sock, toejam, and of course stinky feet dominate a poor (or lucky : ) ) human man. Love your work, and looking forward to reading your great writing again.
Author's Response:
In that case, I'll take my time to ensure the quality stays high! Indeed, I like the idea of the orc dominating a tiny man who is attracted to her feet, it will be interesting writing a story that is less focussed on the cruel nature of giantesses.
[Report This]Date: October 16 2018 12:31 AM Title: The girl who played with fairies
I'm not really into F/f stuff but great chapter none the less. Overall, it seems like you've been more descriptive with your writing in this chapter which I appreciate, such as when you described the fairy's boot insole as "blackened and soggy, still retaining some warmth from Sapphire's sweating foot." or when you described the female orc's feet as "wide and meaty" and the toes as thick and strong; likewise I like how descriptive you went with the toejam as well such as you describing the orc's as "a tangy orange in color and more solid than that of the dark elf, comparable to a soft cheese. The flavor was overwhelming cheesy too, with an intense sour kick." I hope to see more toe jam eating scenes in the future. Speaking of the boot insole, I appreciate how you included both in shoe and insole stuff in this chapter, hope to see more going forward as well, such as the person forcing the tiny to lick and scrape of all the gunk and sweat from their insole with their mouth and for them to eat it. I also greatly appreciated the return of female orc feet, albeit it was somewhat brief. I sincerely hope we get to see a female orc dominate a human man again with her boots, socks, toejam, and feet again. I also appreciated the brief sexual humilation bit towards the end, with the faeries laugjing and taunting the main character about their feeting turning them on and getting them to orgasm. Hope to see that expanded in future chapters. Lastly, I really enjoyed the final part of the story where you followed up with the character to see how they were doing with their new foot torture filled life and all the other torments that they are going through. I thought it added a lot to the story and hope to see this going forward in your stories. Overall, really great chapter, it's subtle, but it really seems like you stepped up your writing with this one, eager to see more, keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Hey thank you for the added depth to your review, it gives me some insight into what people want to see. I felt like this one flowed a lot better whilst writing it, so I am glad the quality appears to be improved! It's good to know that you like the toejam stuff, I was worried that I might be going a tad too far but apparently not haha. So sure, more of that kinda thing coming up :)
Since the whole orc feet element went down so well, I'm starting to feel like writing the kind of story you describe. It won't be the next story, nor can I promise it will be soon, but I would enjoy writing a full story about a female orc and her tiny pet with an uncomfortable attraction to her stinky feet. Maybe the orc will even have sisters...
Thanks again for the feedback, hope you enjoy further stories!
[Report This]Date: October 13 2018 5:28 AM Title: The girl who played with fairies
great story! i enjoyed seeing the main character as a female for once. Keep up the good work. As for your next story i dont mind the delay. You always put great quality in your stories. Any hint as to whats next?
Author's Response:
Thanks! There's a couple in the works, one about a witch and her son and another about a trio of ogresses (think orcs but bigger and stinkier). Yeah I'm trying to slide female protags in here and there to mix things up a little. So long as it's a female dishing out the hurt, I don't mind writing about it!