[Report This]Date: July 10 2019 11:30 AM Title: The Invitation
Love it, I hope this gets finished
[Report This]Date: April 15 2019 1:47 PM Title: The Invitation
Just continue the story the way you think fits best, I think the path you’ve made right now is great, and that you should keep writing.
[Report This]Date: December 01 2018 5:48 PM Title: The Invitation
Awesome material, man! Ideas + input: Wondering, if you don't mind going a little Political...that, being a College, as mostly Leftist, could ya make Alex out to be Conservative (or Trump supporting), which makes the Giants (Couples, especially) wanna "GET HIM" even more? Thanks!
[Report This]Date: November 26 2018 2:43 PM Title: The Invitation
Dude keep going! its a good story! more people will read it once you add more chapters, (lots of poeple just look at the number of chapters, bigger is better, but I perfer content) and keep the over all story going, if you post how long we should wait for a chapter then it shows how your active.
Date: November 13 2018 9:56 PM Title: Introduction
Nice going
Date: November 13 2018 9:55 PM Title: The Invitation
Super nice going
Date: November 13 2018 12:11 PM Title: The Invitation
10 percent of all people are tiny, and they don’t build to support them? That’s 753 million people!
Date: September 24 2018 2:45 PM Title: The Invitation
Like the start has loads of potentiaal keep it up more people will read when they see there is a few chapters but well written and good start :P
[Report This]Date: September 21 2018 7:10 AM Title: The Invitation
Well, given that one of the descriptors is "crush?" I'd say Alex is going to get into terminal trouble. The kind that turns him into a blood-red pancake by the end of chapter 2!