[Report This]Date: August 31 2018 10:13 AM Title: Sunday
This is brilliant. I think you could work a little more on describing the perspective of the tiny people, what their world looks like and so on. That'll make the chapters a tad longer, but it will help the reader immerse as deeply as Mike has immersed in Laura's butt (sorry for that, lol).
But, again, brilliant. I'm loving this to bits and I can't wait for more.
Date: August 31 2018 7:35 AM Title: Sunday
im loving the story so far and am exited to see what happens to mike next :p
[Report This]Date: August 16 2018 5:40 PM Title: Sunday
Hyde and Holly got new chapters, and now you have a new story! All in one week! It’s like all my favorites decided to post at once! ^.^
Very much looking forward to where this leads, given the backside is my personal preference. :P
Author's Response:
Glad you're excited, hope I can give you a good read.
Date: August 14 2018 9:56 AM Title: Sunday
a great hurray to see a new story from you. your stories are some of the best on the site, and this is no exception. lovin mike's situation under laura's bubbly teutonic ass, and emily, a woman with a big ass who loves farting (in a shrinking story), good lord take me home.
Author's Response:
Happy to hear people like it, hope to deliver!