Date: November 17 2018 7:52 PM Title: Taking the 'Bus'
Great chapter! I love the relationship development between Carissa and Jackie. I especially love the set up for the role reversal! I think that would be such a fun shift of perspective and opens a new world of storylines! Great work!
[Report This]Date: November 12 2018 6:33 AM Title: Taking the 'Bus'
Fantastic story so far! This is my kind of story, very small girl and lots of foot content, plus it's mostly gentle. Really looking forward to future chapters, I like the world you've built for these characters, it all feels somewhat real as that's probably how society would treat micros if they were real. Keep it up!
Date: November 09 2018 3:13 PM Title: Taking the 'Bus'
The shopping trip was fun, and I'm enjoying seeing the relationship get farther along, as well as the other two slowly trying to make things better between them after the past
[Report This]Date: November 07 2018 4:52 PM Title: Shopping their Problems Away
Great chapter again!
I'm glad that Jackie got to see Carissa defend her like that. It's a nice first step for them actually getting on friendly terms.
You also did a good job with the foot interaction near the end. Nicely detailed.
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words! I do defiantly plan to have Jackie and Carissa interact more in the next chapter, just them together without Marleigh to get more on friendly terms.
Date: November 07 2018 4:21 PM Title: Taking the 'Bus'
This continues to be one of the best stories on here. Truly a unique plot concept coupled with great writing. This may be too divergent for your vision, but I would love to see future size variance between Jackie, Marleigh, and Carissa such as Marleigh shrinks to Jackie's size and Carissa has fun with both of them or Jackie somehow becomes a giant compared to Marleigh and Carissa in a role reversal. This would be predicated on the discovery of invention of a size changing device but would make for a fun and interesting dynamic. Perhaps a tiny Marleigh would gain an appreciation for feet just like Jackie or a giant Jackie would return the favor (playfully) for her school alternatively a giant Carissa could prove a playful antagonist. I know it's a long shot, but the reason I even suggest is that you are very good at capturing people's emotional responses to each other, and having such size changes would definitely involve significant changes to how the characters relate to each other. Anyway, excellent work, and I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: A role reversal in this story is something I've personally thought of adding. It might be a stretch in the story's world but it could happen. After the next chapter I have planned, I don't have anything else so it could be an idea to think about. Also, thank you for the kind words, it really makes me want to keep writing this story!
[Report This]Date: October 25 2018 8:01 PM Title: Facing her Fears
I really like how Carissa is attempting to atone for what she did in the past. I think her trying to defend micros was a good touch too. You're doing a great job of showing how she's actually remorseful now.
Hopefully the three of them can become friends in the future. I'm sure there could be plenty of cool interactions if they did.
I'm looking forward to how things go forward from here! Great job and keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you! I noticed that as well in other stories, the girl who does the smashing, eating and other terrible things to the tiny people don't feel all too guilty or remorseful. I kind of wanted to add a twist to that by putting Carissa as a human who has done terrible things to Jackie as well as her friends. On the note of them being friends, I think so. Hopefully that will hopefully lead to more interactions between not only Marleigh and Jackie but with Carissa as well. Anyways, thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: October 24 2018 10:10 PM Title: Taking the 'Bus'
Really enjoyed it once again. I look forward to seeing interactions with all 3 of them.
[Report This]Date: October 24 2018 3:41 PM Title: Facing her Fears
I really hope the ladies are going shoe shopping!
:))))
Author's Response: They might be, only time will see :)
[Report This]Date: October 23 2018 6:42 PM Title: Facing her Fears
Just more.
Author's Response: I will hope to have the next chapter out sooner rather than later, glad to see that you're itching for more!
Date: October 09 2018 3:07 AM Title: Taking the 'Bus'
Really like this kind of setting and the characters involved in this story, and also where the plot is going.
The whole bus thing also reminds me of a smiliar idea I had so long ago that I forgot about it. I really appreciate you writing down this concept into a story, so thank you :)
I'll be checking this story for updates. In the mean time I whish you good work.
[Report This]Date: September 27 2018 5:26 PM Title: "Fond" Memories
A wonderful chapter, rare to see a giant type get a redemption arc.
Author's Response: Right? Even if they’ve done terrible things like Carissa has, doesn’t mean they can’t at least try to fix things.
Date: September 19 2018 8:05 AM Title: Taking the 'Bus'
Just popped in to say that I'm looking forward to reading the new chapter. And it looks like the story isn't over yet? That's great news! When I can take a break from writing my own stories, this will be the first story I read. I think I'll re-read it from the very beginning.
Author's Response: I look forward to see how you think the story is evolving! Hope your stories go well, maybe I’ll take a look over there and see how they’re doing ;)
Date: September 19 2018 12:26 AM Title: Some Fun
i'm glad this is not the last. things are about to get interesting :)
Date: September 18 2018 10:04 AM Title: Taking the 'Bus'
Very excited to see where this goes. Hopefully Jackie and Marleigh can progress beyond foot rubs to actual footplay and foot exploration. Really enjoying the gentle, playful interaction. Great work!
Date: September 18 2018 3:11 AM Title: Taking the 'Bus'
Fantastic addition. Would have loved to see more of the foot massage. Hopefully next time. Curious to see where it goes as well
Date: September 03 2018 8:14 AM Title: The Date
Nice story.
I liked the foot relates part.
I hope to see more feet in the story
[Report This]Date: August 24 2018 11:52 AM Title: Taking the 'Bus'
Well, Chapter 4 was great, but you say that there is only one more chapter. I can't help but be disappointed. It felt like the story was just getting started. I guess I'm curious to see if the ending will be happy or tragic. The story seems like it is getting cut short rather abruptly, which leans more toward something unfortunate happening.
Date: August 23 2018 11:43 AM Title: Taking the 'Bus'
A new chapter! Yessss! I was getting nervous. Can't wait to read more.
Date: August 23 2018 12:38 AM Title: The Date
you really got me curious about the asian market now. nice story so far, quite original to say the least