Date: August 10 2018 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 2
Cool, I'd love to see her Aunt eventually come and get her. Will that ever happen?
[Report This]Date: July 31 2018 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 2
i created an account just to review this. the scene where kayla gradually talks to rose and gains her trust is the best “adjustment to shrinking” bit i ever read, it reads like what might actually happen instead of an erotic fantasy. will there be more pls?
Author's Response:
Wow, that's high praise. Thank you. There are more than enough sex scenes written on this site, but it's kind of boring if you're not emotionally invested in the characters. So before I think about going in that direction I gotta develop them. I'm working on more as we speak.
Date: July 31 2018 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 2
Fantastic. I think we n Rose will think those big breasts beautiful myself. Very well done
Date: July 31 2018 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 2
Yay, a gentle giant!
Really enjoying this and looking forward to more. And congrats on putting an original take on a familiar scene.
[Report This]Date: July 31 2018 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 2
A good start so far. I like the diary form. It's fun, unique, and a first personal account from the larger perspective is nice to get. I see you have plans for this to a bit, say, juicier, so I look forward to it.