[Report This]Date: August 28 2018 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 6
This almost seems funny, Narina wiped out the army like it was nothing. I hope she doesn't wipe out the dragon by accident. She is simply huge!
Author's Response:
The dragon's going to do his best, but it may not be enough
Date: August 27 2018 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 6
Great stuff. I love the image of dozens of soldiers tangled in her hair. Narina's innocence and obvliousness is kind of charming (though I imagine the soldiers disagree). I wonder if any of them are still trapped in her hair or if any managed to trek up her sleeve during their assault.
Author's Response:
It's likely there's still a few of them accidentally tagging along on Narina's person without her knowing
[Report This]Date: August 27 2018 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh! I feel bad for that army.....I mean not really, but I feel like I should feel bad for that army. I hope Narina's puppy is okay!
Author's Response:
The army probably does deserve a little sympathy...