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Reviewer: Cameron99 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2018 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great chapter Goddess. I wish I could take Mias place

Reviewer: Arkcrono14 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2018 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

I absolutly love this story already, hope theres more its really good so far.

Reviewer: Leylagts Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14 2018 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

Thanks so much 

Its great 

Are you german btw

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2018 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like it.  There are a few unfinished sentences at the begining; but the story flows and has a great plot so far.  It would be a neat twist if the giant girl was the one that was behind the tour bus, effectively setting up all the Nanos.

I can't wait to read where this goes.



Author's Response:

There were..? Damn it! I swear I rewrote it twice so far because I didn't like the drafts Xl

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