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Reviewer: Gigatennisstar Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2018 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 4

Loving Nanoverse stories. Also to have a story with a German giantess is very interesting. I like international giantesses. So far I have been enjoying the ineractions and scenarios in this story. I've always been a fan of small people on the bus which is how the story caught my attention. The detail is pretty superb and I think you have a good voice in this. Love to see more!

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2018 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 3

I like that Mia was the one who "set up" the bus tours. 

I do have to wonder, how much of Mia is modeled after yourself Goddess Lucy?  If I recall, you love calling tinies "insects", just as Mia did {and admittedly as I like to be referred to, big smile}.  I also can't help notice your third person perspective is almost first person when it comes to Mia.  Now you have me wondering if you have long blonde hair too??? {he he he}

There is a question I have though.  Didn't the Nanos start the story off at 2cm originally?  After you wrote the bus was only 2cm I went back and reread chapter 1 and now the Nanos are 1mm.  Did you change that or am I mistaken?

I have a toy Greyhound Bus from when I was a kid.  It's put away; but it's about 5 or 6 inches long.  I just know next time I come across it while putting things in storage I'll be thinking of Mia.

Author's Response:

Hehe, sorry, no blonde hair here. I try doing more first person with her because, well, it's pretty hot. I think I also tried writing from the Nano's perspective but I'm not really giving them any sort of characters so that would be tough (there's just too many so I'm not bothering). And I called them insects with her because most of my Giant characters are, in a sense, me, or at least what I want to see in a cruel Giantess. 


And YES, at the beginning they were 2cm BY MISTAKE, but from other stories of mine they're all about 2mm, because 2cm wouldn't really fit under "nano" here I think. 


And if you ever find that bus just imagine the amazing goddes Lucy crushing it while it's full of micro little people~

Reviewer: Cameron99 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2018 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great chapter Goddess. I wish I could take Mias place

Reviewer: Moti0n Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2018 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 3

Awesome xD

Reviewer: Arkcrono14 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2018 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

I absolutly love this story already, hope theres more its really good so far.

Reviewer: Leylagts Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14 2018 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

Thanks so much 

Its great 

Are you german btw

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2018 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like it.  There are a few unfinished sentences at the begining; but the story flows and has a great plot so far.  It would be a neat twist if the giant girl was the one that was behind the tour bus, effectively setting up all the Nanos.

I can't wait to read where this goes.

Author's Response:

There were..? Damn it! I swear I rewrote it twice so far because I didn't like the drafts Xl

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