Date: May 23 2018 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 2: Keep Your Friends Close and Your Enemies' Daughters Closer
Amazing story so far. Love the direction it's going. Can't wait to see where it goes next!
I also agree with what others have mentioned, there isn't a lot of transformation stories out there but you're doing a phenomenal job!
It would be pretty awesome to see if Tony ends up somehow with Hawthorne and maybe even with Diane.
One idea also that I think would be pretty funny if he spends some time as some sort of doll but it would almost look exactly like him and could be owned by Mrs. Bianchis and we could get a good view of what's unfolding with them and how they're looking for Tony.
Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thank for reading and the review! I'm trying to balance out the whole situation of randomly transforming into things with the overarching story so the Bianchis, Blaines, Hawthorne, etc are definitely going to be prominent. At the same time, I'm going to write some filler that I find interesting/funny. Hope you enjoy the future chapters!
[Report This]Date: May 23 2018 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 2: Keep Your Friends Close and Your Enemies' Daughters Closer
Good start! There aren't many transformations stories so it's good to see someone creating one. I like the plot, interesting and refreshing. Although, I would love if you could make the transformations a bit more descriptive. How he feels, etc. Keep the good job! Hopefully he will become a bra in one of his transformations:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I can definitely work on descriptions and I could see that in his future lol