Date: August 30 2020 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 1: Consequences of Crime
I read your story a few years ago and am still waiting for the next chapters. Your story becomes more and more interesting chaptere after chapter. If you intend to continue it I am ready to help you with suggestions and advice ... Thank you
Date: September 01 2018 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 1: Consequences of Crime
Bonne histoire. Il est possible d'y agouter beucoup plus de chapitres. Ne nous faites pas attendre s'il vous plait
Date: May 23 2018 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 1: Consequences of Crime
Also, are you planning on having the people he ends up with always unaware? Or is there some program where specific people can choose criminals to mess with them?
Author's Response:
Not everyone will be unaware, I like variety. Haven't really figured out how but something along the lines of what you suggested
Date: May 23 2018 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 1: Consequences of Crime
Great story so far! Like others said, I love to see transformation touched on since we don’t see that often. I look forward to see what you cook up!
As others said, I think the gum idea and becoming someone’s butt would be interesting to see. Some kind of liquid to be drank would be a journey too haha
Author's Response:
Awesome! thanks for the review! Mouth play stuff is like ~30% written at this point so that's definitely coming