Reviews For A Little Chemistry
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Reviewer: Nothing21212121 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2018 12:37 PM Title: Just Another Day...

I am really enjoying this story, you've written it very well! I'm just wondering though, when do you plan on next updating this? :)

Reviewer: MiloDanzig Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2018 8:55 PM Title: Just Another Day...

Is Jake invincible right now? He has gone through a number of ordeals that should have killed or crippled by now.

So far I think this is a decent story. I would start a new paragraph when a character starts talking. It will make a lot more lines but it makes the conversation easier to follow. Also, I don't like making giant characters talk in ALL CAPS. It gets annoying to see every line from a giantess written like that. Save the ALL CAPS for when they are yelling.

Reviewer: KinkyTemptress Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 20 2018 7:29 AM Title: Just Another Day...

Okay, serious question: Was this inspired by the story that I'm writing at the moment? It's fine if it was, I'm just REALLY curious. 



Author's Response:

I gotta be honest, I have not looked at your story until just now(haven't read it though), and whatever similarities there are, they're purely coincendental. I was inspired by some of my actual high school experiences and daydreams(I had a crush on my science teacher) for this one. Although, our stories might be somewhat similar in ways, I assure you, mine will differentiate itself later at somepoint, as I'm sure yours will go a different direction as well. I actually already have a sequel idea, and even a concept for a third after that. I apologize if you thought any "copying" was going on, I'm just trying out a test run for my first story on this site, and the high school setting(which is definetely a common setting around here) just seemed the easiest way to test my strenghts and weaknesses.  

Reviewer: atherfeet Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18 2018 10:33 PM Title: Just Another Day...

Love the story so far :)
Any chance of aware material in upcoming chapters?

Reviewer: KinkyTemptress Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 17 2018 4:52 PM Title: Just Another Day...

This story is great! Even if it IS a little familiar...

Reviewer: andymich65 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2018 1:19 PM Title: Just Another Day...

There isnt really many good stories that invole shrinking in high school. I know when i was in school i always wanted that. Great story and cant wait for more!

Reviewer: daftpunk Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2018 4:07 PM Title: Just Another Day...

really good! will you be doing unaware vore?



Author's Response:

This is really a test run for me, and I'm looking to include just about everything, so yes, at some point it will include unaware vore.

Reviewer: Kane001 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2018 2:18 PM Title: Just Another Day...

A nice start. Looking Forward to reading more.

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