Date: April 23 2020 2:32 PM Title: First Day on the Job
Great Story so far! Will their be an update soon? I'm dying to find out what happens next!
I really appreciate the kind words! If I must be honest, 'soon' is a very flexible concept when I am writing this stuff.
Date: December 22 2018 5:40 PM Title: First Day on the Job
Yup, me again
I see you've fallen into making a story that at least has the illusion of some kind of meaning, and the erotic stuff's still spectacular too, so that's great.
Recently, I tripped and fell into a bookshelf, and one of the books fell out and hit me in the head. I fear it may have transferred some ideas of a storyline to me.
Don't worry. It'll work itself out soon enough.
Date: September 16 2018 3:21 PM Title: First Day on the Job
Enjoying this so far. Please continue this. Any chance you could give Aaron another full tour experience through Emma, but we see the entire trip this time through his POV?
I really appreciate the kind words. In point of fact, one is planned, but I'm still ironing out the perspective.
Date: August 27 2018 7:19 PM Title: Big and Small Roleplay
This story definitely being somehow being missed by ppl. I had to create a profile to encourage you, this is one of the top 5 stories I’ve ever read on this website over the years. I think most ppl just lazy like me and don’t comment. Please keep going.
That's really nice of you to say. The content is to blame for both the infrequent updates and the sparse feedback; I suffer no illusions about the purpose this serves. After all, a Pornhub video can have a million views and only three comments.
Date: August 25 2018 3:50 PM Title: First Day on the Job
This was some good shit, but i feel like it jumped into the deep end (I don't think I need to say what I mean there) too soon, and I think a few gaps between erotic stuff would also be nice
I do like the use of a celebrity, and you made the idea of being in a vagina while it gets fucked not seem completely disgusting, so props to ya
Thank you for the kind words. I do not write this stuff with the pretense of telling any more story than is necessary to provide framework for the juicy bits, so the action starts within the first page and doesn't really let up.
This never struck me as the forum for meaningful character arcs, deep storylines, or bold discussions. Some people use it that way, and I respect that, but it's not my game.
Date: June 24 2018 10:02 AM Title: First Day on the Job
I really dig this one. You have a great talent for description. I’m surprised this has so few reviews. I did like the first title better though.
Just fucking with the alphabetization of story titles; I felt like the male POV character needed a name with two syllables. Thanks for the kind words, though!
Date: June 06 2018 10:25 PM Title: A Little Role-Swap
Great story - very original - told from both perspictives.
Thank you, tallie.
Thanks a lot! This one has been the most fun to write, mostly because of the amount of control I have over the scenarios, and the one-on-one situation gives the chance to make it a real storyline instead of an aimless string of sexuality. There is a story there, I promise, but it's slow because it's development comes at the cost of eroticism.