Date: April 29 2009 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
I feel so bad for the poor guy... Honestly, I do. And then being used by his daughter to boot? Man.. that's just sad. But... will you be writing/posting anymore? :D I would love to read more if you did!
~ARWAD
[Report This]Date: February 20 2008 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
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Date: September 01 2007 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
" Above me, loud gurgling sounds come up. Miss Spencer is digesting her breakfast. I feel the monstrous intestines and internal organs weigh upon my shoulders. Her moans are like distant thunder. The giant world of flesh is trembling around me. The walls are pulsating with increased vigour. "
This was my favorite descriptive part. This is very original.
Author's Response: thank you, Andy!! I had a lot of fun writing this story, it's great to see that shared!
[Report This]Date: August 28 2007 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
I read the complete version over at Giantess City. And, I'm glad to see that even Asukafan (whom one might expect to be a somewhat jaded veteran of this subgenre) can be pleasantly taken by surprise.
Author's Response: Hey thanks CC!! Great you enjoyed it ! Hell, a review from Asukafan is indeed a great thing for me.
[Report This]Date: August 24 2007 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good story.
My imagination runs wild about what the customers are doing to little Max.
Would you please describe what is being done to Max that wears him out each day? - maybe tell it from Max's perspective - all the terrifying and messy details...
Author's Response: I'm already on it, Safetypin ! Max's point of view, coming soon! ;-)
[Report This]Date: August 23 2007 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent start, the writing here is of a extremely high level. Its still seems a bit early, so i will hold off on further critque until i get more of the story. But im definately digging whats been presented thus far.
Author's Response: thanks you so much for the review, Asukafan! i'm awfully glad you enjoy it ! :-) i've started the second part. poor Max hasn't seen anything yet, i'm affraid ;-)
Date: August 23 2007 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
It started fine but then it got a little wired for me at the end. Two years now his been with her. You think after that long away you think they will start looking for him the armey or his wrife and kides. I hope there will be a little more info in the next chapter because am a little lost on it. Any way a good start on it. Hope to read more soon BYE.
Author's Response: I see where you come from, Angelolife. In my opinion the " retrieval process" has failed and lieutenant Powers has been classed as Missing in Action ;-). the military background is purely anecdotic, I was not looking really for a realistic plot and all that, but for a relentless and nightmarish process. thanks for reading!!