[Report This]Date: February 02 2019 9:00 PM Title: Crushed No Longer
Not bad! But, the ending felt a little bit rushed. After all; we still don't know what happened to James! Or is that Josh? You shifted around so fast, sometimes, I lost track of who was who.
[Report This]Date: January 15 2019 8:02 PM Title: Saving Light
Mrs. Brooks is really cracking me up...I enjoy this story quite a bit and think the last few chapters have been very good ones. Keep em coming mate!
Date: January 06 2019 2:04 PM Title: The Hidden Danger
Chapter 18 : My goddess
Glad you're comeback !
This chapter is so great i appreciate how poor Adam is tortured by anaware girl's sneakers and boots in the previous chapters but under Chloe sneaker it's different , keep going on this story i can't wait for a discover under her shoe. (Clair's idea next chapter)
Perhaps Chloe will be nice after discovering Adam or she will be mean. Besides , maybe Adam will be tortured by Clair's and Erin's shoes because seemingly , both of them aren't nice with bugs at their feet. ^^
Good work !
[Report This]Date: December 18 2018 12:53 PM Title: My Goddess
Is this really going to be unaware from start to finish? The non-discovery angle is getting a little overdone.
Date: December 18 2018 11:01 AM Title: The Hidden Danger
Really great story, one of my all is ime favourites.
My only criticism is to point out that you breathe using your "lungs", you keep speaking it as "lounges" across many stories and chapters.
Lounges is the plural of lounge, as in living room.
Author's Response:
I am awful with that type of thing. Thank you for pointing it out. I'll try to fix it going forward.
[Report This]Date: December 15 2018 9:49 PM Title: Discovery
So these giantesses are no longer unaware. But, is it a case of too little/too late?
[Report This]Date: November 13 2018 9:52 PM Title: Foot Toy
Dang!
He would've been better off if I had been right!!
[Report This]Date: November 11 2018 7:11 AM Title: Foot Toy
I really like how this chapter and the previous one show off the different perspectives of the same chain of events. Everything was highly detailed too. I do hope that there are more extended interactions with bare or socked feet in the future, but you're still doing a great job.
Keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: November 07 2018 2:26 AM Title: The Discussion
Looks like James has finally bought the farm for real.
Author's Response:
Looks like you were wrong
[Report This]Date: October 28 2018 5:49 AM Title: Ground In Bug
Her life???
She should try walking in Adam's shoes. Or, rather, riding along under them!
Author's Response:
Maybe in a different world. For now, she's the goddess.
[Report This]Date: October 27 2018 5:43 PM Title: Ground In Bug
Great story. Love unaware a lot
Author's Response:
Love the comments a lot
[Report This]Date: October 26 2018 5:25 PM Title: Ground In Bug
what a great story...
Author's Response:
What a great comment...
[Report This]Date: October 09 2018 9:46 AM Title: The Hidden Danger
Loving Amy and her filthy shoe soles. I'd love to see more of that stuff. Really drives home his insignificance.
[Report This]Date: October 08 2018 5:16 PM Title: Black Mud
"Why am I a bug?"
Because it's called for in the script. That's why. LOL!
Date: October 08 2018 9:38 AM Title: Black Mud
I hope someone finds him and keeps him as a pet in a terrarium.
Date: October 08 2018 9:32 AM Title: Nightmare and Dream
Mrs Brooks is a Goddess.
Date: October 08 2018 9:27 AM Title: The Sprint
Cool. Love Mrs. Brooks.
Date: October 08 2018 9:24 AM Title: Undeserved Desserts
Absolutely loved Ashley eating Her pudding. Excellent description. Loved it.